Ninja pumpin muscle

TheMM · #1 November 27th, 2007, 08:23 PM

It had cost him every cent he had, but Naruto couldn't believe what he had gotten anyways. Choji's father was just about ready to throw out a box-like machine into the street and use a jutsu to smash it to bits. Naruto loved the idea of the random destruction of this machine, but when he saw the label on the side, he instantly stopped him from destroying it.

"Naruto, why did you do that?!" asked Choji's father, quite mad at the fellow ninja.
"I couldn't let something like this go to waste!" replied Naruto, seeing the potential with the machine he now held.
"Feh, it's a piece of junk. We Akimichi made it for ourselves, it didn't work for us, why should it work for you?" said Choji's father.
"....I'll buy it from you then!" said Naruto, pulling out his frog-shaped wallet.
Seeing all the money in Naruto's wallet, his mood instantly changed, "Well there Naruto, now you're speaking like an adult. I'll sell it to you, for all of your money in your wallet."
Pulling out a surprisingly large wad of money from his frog and handing it to the taller (and wider) ninja Choji's father took it and gave a quick warning, "Don't say I didn't warn you Naruto....That machine is very sensitive, don't push it's limits, or you might be pushing your own."
Unfortunately for the older ninja, as soon as the money left his hand, Naruto was heading for home.
"Aww....and that was a really dramatic moment too..." said Choji's father to no one in particular, sad that his super-dramatized moment was ruined.
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"Hehehe, I can't wait to use this baby!" said Naruto to himself.

Taking a look at the machine Naruto saw that all it had was the label, a hose, and a dial going from 1-10. What troubled the ninja was where the hose actually went. Not thinking that his mouth would work, the ninja stripped down to his orange (obviously) briefs and....well, I'm not gonna tell you where he put the hose, but you know where he put the hose!

Since he hadn't heard the warning, Naruto quickly turned the dial right to 10 and felt the instant and almost overpowering rush as his muscles grew at an astounding rate. He was pretty skinny before, like most ninja. He had a very lean, taut body that was agile and quick, like it needed to be. In only moments, that body was gone, never to return as he gained the muscle of two ninja, then three, and quickly moving onto four.

Only now did Naruto realize why the Akimichi wanted this machine gone, it was too powerful! Naruto had realized this too late and was paying the (muscle-bound) price. In the midst of his panic, Naruto hadn't noticed that to keep growing muscle, he had grown much taller as well. Now way beyond huge for any kind of measurement or comparison, Naruto couldn't even bend over enough to turn off the machine.

Realizing this, Naruto tried to sit down, but had to sit with his legs far apart and even then, the machine was still pumping as if no strain was being put on it at all.

So now, Naruto could do one of three things: 1. Weight until he was too big, and crush the machine. 2. Stand up until he's so tall the hose just comes out. 3. Go back to the Akimichi house and (hopefully) get Choji's father to take it out for him.

Seeing as how the first two things probably wouldn't work, Naruto quickly got out of the building he was in (which wasn't very hard, as he was now pushing about 30 feet tall and tens of tons of muscle-nin).

After about 5 seconds of running, he stood once more in front of Choji's father, not looking all that surprised at the giant ninja before him.

"I tried to warn you Naruto, but noooo! The demon fox knows everything!" said the much smaller looking ninja, who then used a Multi-size Jutsu to grow to Naruto's height. Turning off the machine and giving it a yank to get it out of Naruto, Choji's father then threw it to the ground, smashing it into a million pieces.

"So...umm...is there anyway to return me to normal?" asked the giant muscle-nin.
"No, of course not! Why else would we want to get rid of that stupid thing?" replied the fellow ninja.
"You mean I'm stuck like this forever?!?" panicked Naruto.
"Yep, your fault though, have a nice life as the biggest, buffest ninja ever."

End.

Pic where I got the idea from: http://mer-boy.deviantart.com/art/Na...s-Big-69489543

ljobenza · #2 November 29th, 2007, 01:24 PM

Chouji's father's name is Chouza just to let you know. :P

TheMM · #3 November 29th, 2007, 01:39 PM

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Originally Posted by ljobenza

Chouji's father's name is Chouza just to let you know. :P

Thanks, I simply couldn't remember his name.

Wild · #4 November 29th, 2007, 10:53 PM

Pretty good story. I can't complain about Naruto stories generally. :3 More! Kekeke

TheMM · #5 November 30th, 2007, 05:53 AM

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Originally Posted by Wild

Pretty good story. I can't complain about Naruto stories generally. :3 More! Kekeke

In the future there will be. This was just a quickie story, almost a jot down really.

chocomus · #6 November 30th, 2007, 10:56 AM

wao... too much inspiring!
*looks at the paper in front of him with another comic half done*
Ok... next time I'll do it ...

RPM · #7 December 1st, 2007, 03:41 AM

Woo, Naruto!

Fun intro, were you gonna continue this or were the others gonna be original?

And...

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Originally Posted by TheMM

1. Weight until he was too big, and crush the machine.

...intentional pun?

TheMM · #8 December 1st, 2007, 10:04 PM

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Originally Posted by chocomus

wao... too much inspiring!
*looks at the paper in front of him with another comic half done*
Ok... next time I'll do it ...

I look forward to that being done Choco.

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Originally Posted by RPM

Woo, Naruto!

Fun intro, were you gonna continue this or were the others gonna be original?

And...
...intentional pun?

I'm not sure what you mean RPM by your first question.

Also, yes, it was a majorly intentional pun.

RPM · #9 December 2nd, 2007, 01:24 AM

Oh, well you said, "In the future there will be. This was just a quickie story, almost a jot down really.", about more Naruto stories, I was just wondering if this was going to be continued, or if you were just gonna do more one-shots that had nothing to do with this one.

Cause sometimes I read those really long stories on fanfiction.net, there's some that are really good and I've gotten used to reading 40k+ word stories

rockhardmuscle1 · #10 December 2nd, 2007, 10:48 PM

Very cool. However, Naruto at 15>>>>>>>Naruto at 12

RPM · #11 December 3rd, 2007, 10:30 AM

Oh hell yeah, no question there

TheMM · #12 December 3rd, 2007, 02:21 PM

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Originally Posted by RPM

Oh, well you said, "In the future there will be. This was just a quickie story, almost a jot down really.", about more Naruto stories, I was just wondering if this was going to be continued, or if you were just gonna do more one-shots that had nothing to do with this one.

Cause sometimes I read those really long stories on fanfiction.net, there's some that are really good and I've gotten used to reading 40k+ word stories

Obviously, yes I will write more Naruto stuff in the future. I doubt I'll continue this one specifically. I like doing these one-shots, it gives me breaks from my stories that I have multiple parts in.

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Very cool. However, Naruto at 15>>>>>>>Naruto at 12

I'm waiting for that time skip to happen before I start doin Naruto (and everyone else) at their older ages.

rockhardmuscle1 · #13 December 3rd, 2007, 09:21 PM

Alright, that shouldn't be too long, should it?

TheMM · #14 December 4th, 2007, 05:39 AM

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Alright, that shouldn't be too long, should it?

Hopefully not. The last episode I saw was where Naruto/Shikamaru/Kiba were fighting the remainder of the Sound Four as well as that silvery haired fellow (his name escapes me currently).

So if I remember correctly, that shouldn't be long.

chocomus · #15 December 4th, 2007, 09:50 AM

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Originally Posted by TheMM

Hopefully not. The last episode I saw was where Naruto/Shikamaru/Kiba were fighting the remainder of the Sound Four as well as that silvery haired fellow (his name escapes me currently).

So if I remember correctly, that shouldn't be long.

What? but the rest of the anime can be seen on youtube. it's just now the episode 37 of the second season, shipuuden. They are all 15 y o. In the 36 episode you can see naruto without his uniform (because he was sleeping in boxers, don't think wrong

) not fully grown yet, but...

And the guy's name was Kimimaro (I'm a bit narutofreak, so what?!)
sorry if this was a bit offtopic, but I couldn't resist.

RPM · #16 December 4th, 2007, 12:21 PM

Huh whatwhat, yeah he's been 15 in the anime for more than half a year, and at least 2 years in the comic O_o

pika626 · #17 December 4th, 2007, 01:06 PM

it true. technically we still have a long ways to go before the 2 year time skip. At least in the television series

RPM · #18 December 4th, 2007, 01:13 PM

Wait... dear god, don't tell me you're watching the American DUBBED version??!?

Oh me... oh my... get the proper fansubs and cleanse your poisoned brains immediately!

chocomus · #19 December 4th, 2007, 01:37 PM

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Originally Posted by RPM

Wait... dear god, don't tell me you're watching the American DUBBED version??!?

Oh me... oh my... get the proper fansubs and cleanse your poisoned brains immediately!

.

Of course not!!!!!
japanese version with subtitles all the way. dub it's just wrong. Imagine, in spain they gave Sasuke and Naruto the same voice than Ash and Brock from pokemon. ew...

TheMM · #20 December 4th, 2007, 01:46 PM

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Originally Posted by chocomus

What? but the rest of the anime can be seen on youtube. it's just now the episode 37 of the second season, shipuuden. They are all 15 y o. In the 36 episode you can see naruto without his uniform (because he was sleeping in boxers, don't think wrong

) not fully grown yet, but...

And the guy's name was Kimimaro (I'm a bit narutofreak, so what?!)
sorry if this was a bit offtopic, but I couldn't resist.

Aye, I know it can be seen on Youtube (or one of several other video sites). Also, the term on dA is "Narutard".

I think it fits some of us (even me) quite well, don't you think?

Thanks for the name.

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Originally Posted by pika626

it true. technically we still have a long ways to go before the 2 year time skip. At least in the television series

I hope not. I wanna get some more mature lookin pics of Naruto from it. So Phoenix can work his muscle-morphing magic.

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Originally Posted by RPM

Wait... dear god, don't tell me you're watching the American DUBBED version??!?

Oh me... oh my... get the proper fansubs and cleanse your poisoned brains immediately!

Aye, I watch the American version, I can't speak any Asian languages.

Fansubs eh? Gladly, just fork over some links and I'll watch em when I get the chance.

Giga_Huge5000 · #21 December 4th, 2007, 02:46 PM

More dub haters? Jeez, why does everyone hate the Naruto dub so much?

On topic, love the story, and can't wait for Chocomus' comics (the other comics you've done are spectacular, have you ever thought of joining dA?). I'm going to continue lurking now.

Salin_TX · #22 December 4th, 2007, 02:48 PM

http://www.dattebayo.com/t Practically every thursday evening (unless they're doing a troll)

Granted I don't think they still have back that far, but you can watch from Naruto: Shippuden begining to the current.

TheMM · #23 December 4th, 2007, 09:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Giga_Huge5000

More dub haters? Jeez, why does everyone hate the Naruto dub so much?

On topic, love the story, and can't wait for Chocomus' comics (the other comics you've done are spectacular, have you ever thought of joining dA?). I'm going to continue lurking now.

Eh, no one ever fully likes the American dubs (or so it seems), ever. Hell, people still bitch and complain about the Funimation dub for DBZ to.this.day.

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Originally Posted by Salin_TX

http://www.dattebayo.com/t Practically every thursday evening (unless they're doing a troll)

Granted I don't think they still have back that far, but you can watch from Naruto: Shippuden begining to the current.

BitTorrents eh? Not my preferred method of download. I might just find em elsewhere or wait to see em.