To Rebuild What Is Broken, Part VI

[mattbarradell]

Travis lay there rocking, holding Nathan's head in his lap stroking his hair gently.

He looked up at Kevin's immense form and glared at him. 'I can't feel a pulse! You killed him you bastard!'

'He deserved it!' Kevin justified 'He watched as Chris beat me! Now when I see Chris I might just do the same to him before I rip him in two!!'

Horrified Travis laid Nathan's head down on the floor and stood up. 'You won't, I won't let you do that!'

Kevin reeled back as though Travis had hit him. 'I love you Travis, why do you care what happens to them. Why are you so upset about him anyway? I've seen how he treated you. I remember he beat you up only a few weeks ago for looking at him the wrong way!'

'Because it's wrong to hurt people, isn't that enough! Because he was...' Travis felt more tears well up in his eyes, he fought them back, refusing to show how he felt to the monster Kevin had become.

Standing up to his full height his chest puffed out Kevin folded his arms over his pecs like a genie in a fairy tale. 'You.... you love him?!' He spat.

'No.... I don't know... he just gave his life for me! What does that tell you about how he felt!!' Travis now couldn't stop the tears spilling from his face. Kevin stepped forward, his foot making the room almost shake, pots clanged in the corner emphacising his intent.

'I LOVED YOU!' He bawled as he stalked towards Travis. Then he stopped a look of surprise on his face.

-cough cough-

He looked down at Nathan's body, Travis turning to see what he was looking at. Nathan's eyes fluttered open slowly. 'Leave him...... a....lone' Nathan tried.

Travis knelt next to him, cradling his bleeding head again. 'You're alive! Oh my god Nathan, you're alive!' Nathan tried to speak. 'No, shhh it's OK, it's OK don't try to speak.'

Kevin watched this with growing anger and jealousy. If he couldn't have Travis, then Travis wouldn't have Nathan! He leant forward his arm outstretched towards them, intent on finishing Nathan off, he was going to suffer and Travis was going to watch!

Nathan's eyes widened as he saw Kevin advance on them and with all his strength pulled Travis away from Kevin's reach convinced that he meant to hurt him. 'No!' Nathan croaked as Kevin's hand reached the back of Travis' shirt. Just as he reached him thought Kevin fell onto one knee, grasping his chest. He bellowed in pain, trying to get inside his own chest with his mighty hand to soothe the pain building there.

Travis turned, supporting Nathan to see Kevin clutching at his chest, his head back, eyes rolled to the whites. Strange bubbling noises seemed to be coming from him, not his throat his whole body.

Kevin's head lolled forward, fear in his eyes. 'What's happening? Why.... am.... Why does it... hurt?'

With that he landed on his front with a loud thud that actually did shake the room this time. Travis and Nathan watched this frozen, unable to run or help.

Kevin's body was starting to sweat profusely, but it wasn't sweat, it was pink and seemed to be pooling underneath him. 'Help me!' This time his voice was bubbling as well, like he'd gargled it. His eyes looked towards Travis and pleaded with him. 'Oh god help me!'

His body was melting! It was starting to pool underneath his huge frame. Looking down Kevin saw this and snapped his neck, almost fluidly back towards Travis.

'Help me, oh god please Travis.... it hurts, help me. I'm sorry I hurt you.... and Nathan... just HELP me! Pleeeease.' He was hard to understand, but he sounded more like Kevin than a few moments ago, more like the boy he was.

Travis watched as Kevin's body melted in front of him, Nathan held onto him, his heart racing. Kevin tried to lift himself up, strands of pink fluid between his chest and the floor appeared and Travis felt like vomitting. Kevin gave one last glance at Travis and Nathan with his only remaining eyes, his other have spilled out as fluid onto the floor. He whispered something and crashed to the floor with a loud smack, his body caving in on itself and leaking from a thousand different hollows.

The remains of Kevin's body now covered most of the kitchen floor. Travis and Nathan lay there clutching each other, afraid to move, unable to move.

Eventually Nathan turned his head towards Travis. 'What did he say to you? Before...' He trailed off unable to finish the sentance.

'He didn't say it.... to me.' Travis replied a few moments later, having trouble finding the words.

'To me?'

'He said.... he said, Look after him...' And with that Travis put his head to the nape of Nathan's neck and cried. Nathan just lay there holding him, watching the last of Kevin dissolve.

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After what felt like hours, Travis helped stood up on shaky legs and helped Nathan up. He was very heavy and for a moment he wished he was stronger, able to support Nathan fully. He looked back at the mess in his kitchen and felt sick to his stomach regretting his wish.

Nathan grunted, holding his side, 'I think I broke a rib... or two.' Travis lead him to the living room and lay him on the couch.

'Wait there I'll get something to help the pain.' He quickly went to the downstairs bathroom, not looking at the kitchen as he passed it. Grabbing some supplies and aspirin he headed back to the living room. 'Here take these.' He handed three aspirin to Nathan.

'Water?' Nathan asked before realising and saw Travis look out towards the kitchen sorrowfully. 'Never mind, it's OK.' He put them in his mouth and swallowed them dry. Travis began tending to the cut on his head, he managed to clean it up and he bandaged it the best he could manage.

'I'll ring for an ambulance.' He got up and headed to the phone.

'No,' Nathan grimaced and grabbed his arm, the sensation reminded Travis of what Kevin had done before he changed and instinctively pulled away. 'Sorry... I mean what will you tell them?'

Travis stopped before grabbing the phone from the cradle and thought for a moment. 'Hit and run? I got you inside and then called for an ambulance?'

'What about... the... kitchen?'

Travis looked at him for a moment and sighed heavily. 'I'm going to have to clean it... him up I guess.' His head fell to his chest and he noticed for the first time that he was half naked, just a t shirt covered his modesty now. Blushing he covered his genitals and turned away. Nathan saw this and smiled.

'Don't mind me... -cough-... I mean...' Nathan now blushed, he'd only just noticed himself. And he was impressed, even in these circumstances, Travis had a good body, lean hairy legs, with a great firm butt.

'What?' Travis asked forgetting himself again and turning back around. Nathan got a full frontal flash before Travis covered himself up again, this time pulling the hem of his tee down in front of his crotch. He's hung! Nathan thought to himself, I wasn't expecting that. Nathan looked away.

'Go get changed first... -cough-, then deal with... that.... I'll help you.' He tried to get up but jsut ended up crying out in pain and coughing hard.

Travis put his hand on his chest and gently pushed him back down. 'No, you rest, I'll hurry and clean... and deal with it and then we'll ring an ambulance OK?' Travis left the room still clutching his tee over his crotch before Nathan could argue. Nathan saw Travis ass again as he left, the back riding up as Travis pulled on the front, and smiled to himself before coughing again.

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Travis got changed and went back to the kitchen. Kevin was gone now, all that remained was a pool of thick pink liquid that shimmered in the early evening light. Taking a deep breath he grabbed another mask and stepped around it, heading to the cupboard containing a mop and bucket. Thinking twice he went out the back door and headed to the garage. Travis was foudn what he was looking for and returned to the kitchen.

Travis stood in the door way wearing a thick rubber apron his mom used when soldering her jewellery. In his left hand he carried a roll of waterproof, heavy duty bin bags and in his right a snow shovel. He began by opening a bag and sitting it on the floor, turning back he pushed the shovel into the liquid and scooped up as much as he could before emptying it into the bag.

After about 20 minutes of this he was sweating and had filled up nine bags. All that was left was residue on the floor tiles. Thankfully it was a ceramic floor and it was well sealed otherwise he might of had to take the tiles up.

'You OK Travis?' Nathan called to him between coughs.

'Yeah, nearly... nearly done!' He called back wiping his brow and the tears from his cheeks. He got the mop and bucket and filled it with hot soapy water and disinfectant from under the sink. Returning to work he began to mop up the last of what had been his friend. After he had thoroughly cleaned every inch of the floor he stood back and looked for any evidence of what had happened. Other than a slight dent in the wall where Kevin had knocked Nathan into it, the kitchen was spotless. Taking off his mask slowly he smelled the air. The disinfectant in the water had made the room smell like a hospital but he could fix that later.

Taking off the apron he headed back to the living room, standing in the door he noticed that it had gotten darker and saw Nathan's shadow lying on his couch. Before he could take a step into the room he turned and ran to the bathroom. Falling to his knees in front og the toilet he threw up. He stayed like that till all he was doing was dry retching and wiped his face with some tissue.

Moments later he was sat next to Nathan, who had mercifully stopped asking if he was OK and was calling for an ambulance. 'Hello, yes, I want an ambulance there's been a hit and run... Nathan McHale... My name's Travis Perkins... Yes he's conscious... no just his head but I think he broke a rib or two... I know I shouldn't but the road is quite busy and I didn't want to leave him there... OK, yeah I'll stay with him till they get here.' With that he put down the phone and sat next to Nathan in silence. Nathan winced every now and then but didn't say anything either. They sat in the dark together like that until the ambulance arrived.

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Five minutes later there were lights flashing through the window and a knock at the door. Almost automatically Travis stood and went and let in the paramedics.

'Through here?' The paramedic asked not waiting for an answer. He walked into the room turning on the light and checked over Nathan. The second paramedic joined him with a stretcher and a few minutes later they were putting him into the ambulance.

'Can he come with me?' Nathan asked nodding at Travis.

'No it's OK Nathan. You don't have to...'

'Is he a relative?' The paramedic asked eyeing him up.

'No, he's my friend.' Nathan replied. With that Travis got into the ambulance and sat next to Nathan. Nathan held out his hand looking at Travis' face as he did so.

He looked at the hand a moment before saying 'Don't push me back over again.' He took Nathan's hand and they sat like that, looking at each other, all the way to the hospital.

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Tell me what you think. Apologies to anyone being a little shocked by it.

[Excelsior]

erm.....
WOW!!!
This is quite good, plenty of plot twists. Wouldn't mind seeing Nathan grow now

[sexiscriptor]

yes yes; let's make them both grow a little. it's terrible what happened to kevin...but he did say for nathan to take care of travis, yeh? and nathan totally bones to growing huge and boning boys with his grown penis, yeh?
methinks all would be right with the world ;p
~Palmer

PS: i mean, kevin shoulda paid attention really to what travis said about it being a shock to the blood or stuff...plus he prolly didn't let it finish what it needed to do. plus i'm sure travis didn't have it quiiiite right, neh? Ok, i'm done rationalizing

[skumbum]

Wow, that was something...

[chocomus]

Actualy i've been thinking for a long time that if some of the formula growth stories were real, there would be a lot of accidents, like Kevin's. And some casualities. Being this fantasy stories i didn't thought I could see something like this, but... damn! It seems so realistics that it's a bit scary

Nice part. I'd like to read more. And that they grow... everywhere

Poor kevin. Nobody deserves that. Well, maybe Chris... He's an asshole

[mattbarradell]

Wow thank you for the feedback!

I'm glad people are enjoying this story so far, writing next part now for you.

xx

[Excelsior]

Originally Posted by mattbarradell

Wow thank you for the feedback!

I'm glad people are enjoying this story so far, writing next part now for you.

xx

you'd better 'urry up on that...

[AngryLeek]

i wondered if this was the conclusion for the story, so i'm relieved to read below it that you're not leaving it to our imaginations to fill in the rest of the threads. Not sure how anybody will mess with that growth solution now that it dissolved Kevin after a few moments - you never really see much of this sort horrific consequence. I feel for Kevin. While i'm glad that he wasn't all bad, just wounded & blinded, his sort of shortsighted obsession & vicious temper fit a victim. Anyhow I'm almost looking forward to how Nathan & Travis will grow closer more than any more potential muscle growth. And fianlly I loved reading how you describe their innate connection by the way. Also, i finally understand what a chav is thanks to my british bench-mate.

So, thanks again & have a merry christmas/happy holiday/jiveful kwanzaa/etc.,

[nypup2train]

I'm impressed. This story has managed to surprise me on more than one occasion with a plot development I didn't expect at all -- WITHOUT being heavy-handed about it, or playing obvious and insulting "gotcha" games. I'm eager to see where things will lead now, since I can't assume anything based on where this installment left off! Cool.

The situations and characters so far are definitely interesting -- nothing we haven't seen before, but originally employed and well written. The growth so far has been very hot (despite the disturbing--but exciting--turn) and there's obviously hope for plenty more to come.

If I found anything lacking in the story to this point, I'd have to say the description of Kevin's size post-growth could be a little less vague/indirect. I'm not saying the story has to be loaded with stats and exact measurements, but the only information we get about his new stature comes in a series of hints (his head touching the ceiling, the size of his feet, etc) that don't add up to a coherent mental picture, at least for me. Yet there's endless detail on the exact size of his new endowment, which makes for an oddly imbalanced focus. (IMHO.)

-Pup

[AngryLeek]

Originally Posted by nypup2train

I'm impressed. This story has managed to surprise me on more than one occasion with a plot development I didn't expect at all -- WITHOUT being heavy-handed about it, or playing obvious and insulting "gotcha" games. I'm eager to see where things will lead now, since I can't assume anything based on where this installment left off! Cool.

The situations and characters so far are definitely interesting -- nothing we haven't seen before, but originally employed and well written. The growth so far has been very hot (despite the disturbing--but exciting--turn) and there's obviously hope for plenty more to come.

If I found anything lacking in the story to this point, I'd have to say the description of Kevin's size post-growth could be a little less vague/indirect. I'm not saying the story has to be loaded with stats and exact measurements, but the only information we get about his new stature comes in a series of hints (his head touching the ceiling, the size of his feet, etc) that don't add up to a coherent mental picture, at least for me. Yet there's endless detail on the exact size of his new endowment, which makes for an oddly imbalanced focus. (IMHO.)

-Pup

wow pup, do i feel like a rube after reading your response. I'm re-reading right now to try to appreciate those points to mentioned. Cheers, bro

[Excelsior]

Are we going to get a continuation of this story, or is it just going to die?

[MAZIVKAROLY]

Doin' a really fine job. Please, let us hear some more as soon as you can get to it.

Many thanks!!!

[redroger11]

Well it's been a few years. But have you thought of having a lot of little Kevins grow out of the goo after Travis buries the bags? Something like each one gets muscular and strong, but never gets taller than two feet or so. Still ten or twelve little Kevins not quite remembering why they are angry. Or why there are so many of them..
Hey man, your imagination is a good one. Do something you want to with the story and add a few chapters to it. See where it takes you.

redroger11