My first MG comic...

[Jaypat]

Go easy on me. I'm not a professional. In fact, I'm sure a sixth grader could do better. But since we don't allow sixth graders on this board, you'll have to make do with me.

[hearmenowu2]

Very cool Comic JayPat keep it up

hearmenowu2

[redkage]

Oh no, you're MUCH higher than a six grader, believe me. More like...High school freshman or sophmore.

[Giga_Huge5000]

Hell of a lot better than anything I could ever do! Nice comic Jaypat. I hope you'll be willing to do more.

[hulumulu]

Good storyboard. Looking forward to future works.

[soccerstud88]

DUDE!! You Have to keep this up that was so fucking hot! The story Is great and simple and the growth is hot!! I got completely hard and Wanted to blow my load when he started to drink the whole bottle!! Great Work

[Lionor_King]

Hey everyone starts somewhere and this is awsome i liked it and it flows very well Keep it up id like to see what the guy at the school does when he sees the new and improved muscle man

[soccerstud88]

Btw I Think you should totally continue this comic just a few more pages. Really Pump This Kid up with muscle and height!! Maybe he does some flexes and see's another bottle or two!! My rock hard just thinkin about it But if not I look forward to more comics by you

[Rabidoberman]

Wow, most awesome comic. I hope to see more. : )

[mutador]

Very good work! you draw muscles quite well for not being into drawing, and also the arrangement of the story and the moments is well done

[muscl4life]

I thought it was really HOT! I liked the whole clean, straight and simple concept of the comic, and the art was indeed very good, but of course there's always room for improvement, but bottom line this was indeed amazing. You surely belong to that group of "disgusting people" with talent for writing, drawing and doing so much more than the rest of us mortals (ARGH!!! I hate you all so much right now)

Congratulations, buddy.



Cheers

[dolphinbad]

Very nice work guy! Great Comic! Really, you have much talent, keep posting!

[BBMikeNJ]

Two big thumbs up, man.

[fabiolamin]

I'm brasilian and liked very much the story...

I wanna see more...

congratulations.......

[nj.]

Haha, you're maybe right about the drawing style, but at least it was clean and clear, and you have a good idea of what things look like. Do you happen to (have) read a lot of comics? 'Cos you fill your panels up well, in terms of composition, and you made the growth scene pretty hot, despite it being less than realistic-looking.

So, good job despite the limited drawing experience!

[chocomus]

It's good! I like it

You should think seriously about doing more, please

[Jaypat]

Originally Posted by hearmenowu2

Very cool Comic JayPat keep it up

hearmenowu2

Your stuff is cool, too. After drawing this, I can't even begin to think how much work animation must be. I have a whole new respect for it, and you.

Originally Posted by redkage

Oh no, you're MUCH higher than a six grader, believe me. More like...High school freshman or sophmore.

I hope this doesn't mean I have to find a date for the prom!

Originally Posted by Giga_Huge5000

Hell of a lot better than anything I could ever do! Nice comic Jaypat. I hope you'll be willing to do more.

I don't think it would take much work to get as good (and I use the term loosely) as me...

Originally Posted by hulumulu

Good storyboard. Looking forward to future works.

Thank you. I always look forward to your stuff. Those 3D videos you do are very hot.

Originally Posted by soccerstud88

DUDE!! You Have to keep this up that was so fucking hot! The story Is great and simple and the growth is hot!! I got completely hard and Wanted to blow my load when he started to drink the whole bottle!! Great Work

Hey, great to see you're still around! Yeah, I think these things work best when they're simple. I almost had him take a third swallow before he guzzled the bottle, but I think it worked out better this way.

Originally Posted by Lionor_King

Hey everyone starts somewhere and this is awsome i liked it and it flows very well Keep it up id like to see what the guy at the school does when he sees the new and improved muscle man

I thought about doing that, but I'm not sure my drawing skills are up to it yet.

Originally Posted by soccerstud88

Btw I Think you should totally continue this comic just a few more pages. Really Pump This Kid up with muscle and height!! Maybe he does some flexes and see's another bottle or two!! My rock hard just thinkin about it But if not I look forward to more comics by you

Yeah... I'm not that great at drawing yet. I don't think I could draw him any bigger and pull it off.

Originally Posted by Rabidoberman

Wow, most awesome comic. I hope to see more. : )

I'm sure I'll do more. There aren't that many people out there doing this kind of thing. Most of the MG comics are either FMG or furry. They're ok, but they don't quite float my boat.

Originally Posted by mutador

Very good work! you draw muscles quite well for not being into drawing, and also the arrangement of the story and the moments is well done

Thank you very much. I used a lot of photos and drawings as guides. They helped a lot.

Originally Posted by muscl4life

I thought it was really HOT! I liked the whole clean, straight and simple concept of the comic, and the art was indeed very good, but of course there's always room for improvement, but bottom line this was indeed amazing. You surely belong to that group of "disgusting people" with talent for writing, drawing and doing so much more than the rest of us mortals (ARGH!!! I hate you all so much right now)

Congratulations, buddy.



Cheers

I seem to remember you doing a couple of these MG comics, and if I remember, they're pretty hot themselves. So, I think you find yourself in the same group.

Originally Posted by dolphinbad

Very nice work guy! Great Comic! Really, you have much talent, keep posting!

Thank you. I will try.

Originally Posted by fabiolamin

I'm brasilian and liked very much the story...

I wanna see more...

congratulations.......

Thank you. I'll keep at it.

Originally Posted by nj.

Haha, you're maybe right about the drawing style, but at least it was clean and clear, and you have a good idea of what things look like. Do you happen to (have) read a lot of comics? 'Cos you fill your panels up well, in terms of composition, and you made the growth scene pretty hot, despite it being less than realistic-looking.

So, good job despite the limited drawing experience!

I'm really a big movie buff. I think I get my sense of composition from films rather than comics, but it's all visual story telling. As for the "art," I'm already getting some good drawing advice from another artist on the board. Hopefully, the next one will be better.

Originally Posted by chocomus

It's good! I like it

You should think seriously about doing more, please

Thank you. I will do more if you will do more, because you're stuff is much better than mine.

[Spanisheddie92]

It's sooooooo Cool! Please don't ever stop in the near future!

[hearmenowu2]

Originally Posted by Jaypat

Your stuff is cool, too. After drawing this, I can't even begin to think how much work animation must be. I have a whole new respect for it, and you.

.

Thanks Animation is a very tuff form of media to master you you spend years trying to master it. If your ever going into that line of work you will tend to notice alot of things more clearly. Like seeing how someone walks or moving there arms from left to right etc.

hearmenowu2

[sexiscriptor]

I like how you tried to reply to everyone in one thread :P cute :P

anyway, i'm pretty much convinced you're a miracle unto musclegrowth lovers; phenomenal stories and now great comics too. golly!
~Ille

[redroger11]

Hey it got the idea across pretty fast, so you should just ignore any negative comments. It's better than I could do.

Hugs;
redroger11

[Jaypat]

I was requested to continue the comic. I did, but this is as far as it goes. Soccerstud88 did most of the dialog. You can tell because it's a helluva lot hotter than what I usually do.
































In a way I look at this as me learning how to draw. You guys just have to look at my lessons.

[soccerstud88]

B O N E R!!!!!! 8===========0


Dude This comic is freakin amazing, I love how freakin huge you made him at the end! You totally just made my night! I'll be jerkin to this for a long time! Can't wait to see what you come up with next

Thanks Again!
-Alex

[Jaypat]

I should mention that Soccerstud88 hadn't seen the last couple of pages before I posted them.

[Rabidoberman]

Originally Posted by Jaypat

I was requested to continue the comic. I did, but this is as far as it goes. Soccerstud88 did most of the dialog. You can tell because it's a helluva lot hotter than what I usually do.
































In a way I look at this as me learning how to draw. You guys just have to look at my lessons.

Oh, I like.

[bigmag2]

Make more of comics u did a great job! Really hot

[bigbbny]

Very hot. I'm hard. Thanks for posting!