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Old April 30th, 2009, 02:41 PM
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Personality Change

I glanced down at my cell phone- 6:00. I'd only been off work an hour. Damn, the day was dragging. Glancing back up, I decided to approach the bartender and order a Madori Sour. He was cute... really cute. However, being me, he had to ask me twice to speak up because my voice was too soft and I was speaking at the floor instead of to him. He prepared my drinks, (that's right, 4-8 is happy hour) then took my money. I tipped him, and went back to my corner.

I sat there for I don't know how long, listening to the drone of people's conversations competing with the music coming from the video screens placed around the bar. I watched guys come in, laugh with their friends, leave... a regular Wednesday afternoon. One cute guy smiled at me, unfortunately after that I could tell you more about his shoes than his face.

Eventually the bar became more active. More and more people came in for a drink, the sun set, the d.j. turned the music up. After the dance floor became busy, I decided to go dance.

Dancing for me is a release. It's a time where I can just focus on the music, focus on enjoying myself... without worrying about if I'm in someone's way, or if there's a cute guy that's out of my league looking at me... or if I'm staring at him. It's when I can relax, unwind a bit, and reflect on the day--shake the stress away.

Well, I was doing just that, when I felt someone softly grab my waist from behind. It was gentle, but jarred me back into reality. Startled, I jumped a bit, and turned around.

Standing there was a beautiful man, 6'2"... probably about 170 lbs... definitely italian. Nice solid arms, boyish smile... Oh hell, he was laughing at me. I felt my face flushing as I looked to the floor, looking to through the sea of feet to see if there was a way for me to escape. There wasn't. Maybe I was lucky and he was just wanting to move past, maybe he was gone now. I glanced back up... and he was still there, grinning.

"Hey man, you're cute," he said. I felt my face flush again as I tried to stammer out a "thanks". "Mind if I dance with you?"

Without waiting for an answer, he gently put his hand on my waist and started dancing. I think I managed to stammer out "sure"... but it's all a blur. I remember at some point he had turned me around and was grinding me from behind. Oh, and that he had really nice cologne. His shirt was a soft cotton, and I could feel that he was tone underneath. It felt too good to be true! A really hot guy was dancing with me!

Throughout the night we drank more, although how much more I'm not clear on. However much, I was drunk. He didn't seem to be though, and once when I stumbled he caught me, and I felt his bicep tighten up, and got a hard-on. He commented on it, and I blushed, but not as much as I should have. I apologized... well, tried stammering an apology. While I was babbling he interrupted me and said "it's o.k... you're cute, it's good to see you're attracted to me." Then he took put his hand behind my head, gently pulled me in closer to him... and kissed me. "You want to come over?"

I must have said yes, although at the moment I was trying desperately not to cum in my jeans. I succeeded... barely. We walked to his car, made out a bit, and finally drove over to his place. As he opened his door I gasped a little bit... the place was swank! He had full length wall of windows overlooking the bay and everything! He gave me a short tour of his place, culminating in the bedroom. We made out some more, and in a short span of time were lying naked together on his comforter.

His body was awesome. Six pack abs, pecs with little nipples, nice defined arms, it was all there. Then there was his cock. It was big. Not so big as to be considered monstrous, but I was willing to bet it had to be 8 inches, and pretty thick. I don't have sex that often, so it was going to be a challenge if he wanted to top me.

Which he wanted to do. After making out a bit more, we moved a bit lower on each others bodies, then lower... and then... well, yeah... we uh... Anyway, after a while he pulled up, put my legs over my head and teased me a bit with his big cockhead. He asked me if I wanted it. Of course. So he jumped off me and leaned over to his nightstand to grab some condoms. While he was doing that, I noticed some pictures on his dresser. All of REALLY buff men. I asked him about them.

"Oh, those two are just of my ex... and this one of one of my best friends. The other two I went to high school with, see... that's me." Sure enough, he was in the picture, but he looked really little compared to the two muscle boys. Bravely, I asked him "so you like buff guys?"

"Yeah, I do I guess, especially if they are a bit cocky."

"Then why do you like me?" He kissed me.

"I like you because you are cute, and you have a cute ass." As he said this he slapped a little lube on my ass, which made me squirm. "You ready?" I nodded and after a few failed attempts, was able to take the first half of his shaft. Once I had that in, he began pumping slowly at first, then increasingly harder as I accommodated more and more of his thick piece. "Oh fuck dude, you're tight.... fuck" he spat. He slapped my ass as he rode me, slamming me hard enough to force me to cry out. "Yeah, take that cock faggot. You're my bitch. Hear me?" I came, and he continued pounding me. He liked to talk dirty, and honestly, the more he did the more turned on I became. I came twice more before he finally unloaded in me. I was still hard as he pulled out, flipped me over, and put a condom on me.

On me? What was this? I'd never topped. Guys never let me, I was too shy, too submissive. It was just assumed that I was the bottom. Before I had time to process what was going on, he sat his tone ass on my 6 incher. It felt good. Really, really good. As he rode me, he started saying that he was MY bitch. I liked it... a lot. He begged me to fuck him, to pound him. We maneuvered into doggy style and I put my hands on his waste and pounded him as hard as I could. He squeezed his ass on my cock and I lost it. I came... hard. Stars seemed to explode in front of my eyes. I'd never had an orgasm like that one. It felt like every part of my body was on fire, a good fire that I wanted to stoke and feed. It was so good that I came a second time before finally collapsing on top of him. After a few minutes, I pulled out of him, shuddering as my cock was freed from his hole. We cleaned up, and he asked if I wanted to stay the night. I was all too happy to do so. He massaged me, commenting on how tense my muscles were. Then he made me even more happy when he spooned me kissed me goodnight.

I slept good that night... really good, despite my crazy dreams. I dreamt that I was fucking him again, Only this time I was bigger than him. Much bigger. He really was my bitch, and he cried out whenever my cock pushed into his tiny ass. I was so big he couldn't take it all, yet he begged me to fuck him hard. When I came I could see his gut bloat, and as I pulled out my jizz flowed down his leg.

I woke up. The sun was high. The hot guy was nowhere to be seen. I could feel a wet spot down my crotch. I realized I was sore all over as I lifted the covers and looked down at my prick. I flushed as I realized that I had just had a wet dream in this guys bed.

...To be continued.
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Old April 30th, 2009, 03:08 PM
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Nice job

Thanks for this great beginning...looking forward to more to "come."
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Old April 30th, 2009, 04:24 PM
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Ooh, very nice! I can see this going in several different directions, all of them quite entertaining! I'm glad it's "...to be continued!"

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I already love this story.
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nice job! keep up the good work!
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Interesting story...

I see a couple of direction that it seems to be toward that I like... to keep the peace I won't say more...

If I do, I'm likely to get hate mail from some parties that believe all stories here should be nothing but porn. And that getting anything out of a story other than something to jack off to is werid and sick...

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interesting

... can't wait to see where this goes.

plese update

thanks,

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Great start!

Looking forward to chapter 2!!!
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Well, Chapter 2 was on it's way... but the forum logs me out if I use a Mac... so when I went to post, 2 hours of work disappeared. I'll work on it again when I get time
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I am always surprised to hear that some authors compose their stories online rather than in a word processing app.

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Well, Chapter 2 was on it's way... but the forum logs me out if I use a Mac... so when I went to post, 2 hours of work disappeared. I'll work on it again when I get time
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Great start! I look forward to MORE! Thanks for writing!
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Absolutely. No one should rely on an internet connection or an online buffer. Work directly on your own computer, save early and often, and you'll be able to recover from problems like this one.

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Thanks for the criticism... should we open this story up to for I dunno, a four page rant on authoring while online? I've learned from my mistake, thanks.
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No ranting here! I hope you have a chance to write (or re-write) the second chapter soon. I like where this story is, or seems to be going.
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dude, that was excellent i totally look forward to seein where this goes

I think the main guy should worry more about having cum 5 times in probably as many hours than that the 5th was a 'wet dream'--i mean especially considering the hot implications of that wetdream, i'm sure his friend'll understand as much as we do ;D
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more please ?

I really like where this is going. please update soon.

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looking for chap 2

please update if you can. Would really like to see more of this.

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This was a very hot beginning
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Now that's what I'm talking about. The kind of guy that is versatile and willing to help a guy out. Looks like this little sub is gonna be a great dom when he gets a lot bigger. Great stuff, Man. You better Keep Writing.
Please?
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