The Average One

[Maverick0095875]

This would be my 2nd story on this site which by far is the better of the 2 and will become a growing story of sorts

The Average One

By: Maverick0095875

So Zach is 18 years old fresh out of high school and has more money than Donald Trump could ever imagine seeing. Yes, Zach is rich however there is one big down fall to his great prestige that follows having money. He doesn’t have all the he would want nor be the desire of anyone he could dream about male or female. I say this because Zach is your average 18 yr old 5’7 110 pounds, with a slim build. He’s nothing special no abs no real pecs just a flat stomach. So one day he decides to change his miserable skinny self.

He posts an add on Craigslist and in the newspaper that he’s looking for a nutritionist/ trainer. Almost immediately he gets a few replies and one those standouts above the most. It’s from a dude named Kyle, that’s 24 years old. Kyle introduces himself thru his email with an impressive resume with a bachelor’s degree in nutrition and an associate in physical education. So he schedules an interview for the following morning with Kyle at his manor house.

Kyle arrives at the manor at 9:45 am 15 minutes prior to his interview. He moves up the long front stairs to the door where before he ring the doorbell he’s greeted by an older man in his 50’s who greets himself as Gunter, Master Zachary’s butler. He leads Kyle into the main parlor where he instructs him to have a seat and that Zach will be with him momentarily. At 9:59 Promptly Zach enters the room and greets Kyle and for the first time gets a good look the guy. Kyle’s not a big guy but you can tell he’s got a powerful body. At 5’11 slightly taller than Zach he’s built like a lean swimmer. Which immediately impresses Zach because he can tell that Kyle knows how to take care of his body and possibly even his skinny frame?

After about an hour of discussing the job and the perks which would include room and board in the guest house by the pool on the property. Zach formerly offers the position to Kyle, whom gladly and very eagerly accepts the position. You see there’s one small detail about Kyle not a lot of people know about. He’s not just a student of the body and of nutrition. But he’s also a student of supplementation of foods into the body. Thru his studies has been able to develop his own special blend and or mix that can be added to any dish to give the recipient a proper boost of sorts.

Thru his adult life Kyle has begun to develop a sort of fetish for muscle and a certain taste of Marco when it come to life and his special blend has been created to make his fetish’s a reality so upon hearing what a young Zach was offering to him, he almost jumped out of his chair because this would be the best opportunity to be able to expand upon his fetish and taste for those truly bigger guys. Which if successful meant every man could be his own personal playground of sorts.

[howardbeatman]

5'7" & 110 lbs. is not "average"; it's SKINNY! I'm 5-7 and, when I was 18, weighed 150 lbs. No one called me fat... in fact, I was considered kind of small. I know that most of the fiction on this site is wish-fulfillment - but there are limits.

[funboy]

C'mon. This has potential, but it doesn't stand alone as a chapter. You need to put a little more into the story before you can expect meaningful feedback.

[Maverick0095875]

Originally Posted by funboy

C'mon. This has potential, but it doesn't stand alone as a chapter. You need to put a little more into the story before you can expect meaningful feedback.

this was meant more along the lines of a preface to an actual chapter

[funboy]

Ok - that's fair. So - it's definitely worth continuing, at least in my mind. You certainly have my curiosity up. I suspect (hope?) there is a lot more to Kyle than meets the eye, perhaps even Zach too. Some good possibilities here. Hope you decide to run with it. But you need to give us more substance before you will get meaningful (hopefully) feedback. LOL

[quishta1990]

Well this is kinda weird... My name is Zach, I'm 5'7(have been for a couple years now), when I was 18, I weighed around 110lbs.