MASSIVE: A Muscle Encounter Pt 1

[JP71]

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[color=gray]a muscle encounter[/color]

[arpeejay]

Woof! Very nice!

More, please, lots more, and soon! :-)

xoxo

Richard

[evanw]

I may be reading into this far more than I should be, but I'm seeing not only an enjoyable story, but also quite a bit of satire on the present political situation in the United States and the restrictions it imposes on people of different sexual orientations.

Great Story.

[2bored]

Really awesome story. Can't wait for more.

[scot158f]

Awesome start to a story! I hope that bastard ex gets what's coming to him in a Gigantic Way! Great writing!

[Bull]

Very good, but why can't he grow by bringing himself to orgasm? You need to address that I think.

[sexiscriptor]

actually, I think jp71 did address get hiimself off--it has some effect, sometimes, but isn't the same. may not answer your question, but it's not like *nothing* happens :\

anyway, hot story except it kinda felt like you glossed over most all of the actual growth....

Originally Posted by JP71

and his body thickened as his muscles gained so much more mass.

for example, is pretty vague, nevermind much too short :\

saaaaavor the growthiness, man, saaaaavor
~Ille

[JP71]

Thanks guys for the comments. I have considered some of your remarks and am taking them on board. I was going to make this just a two-parter, but I'm nearly finished the next part, and I think I could stretch it further, to a Part 3. I'm really liking where this story is going, and Im really enjoying it.

[philat99]

Here's hoping that Peter (if or when he grows to even half of Paul's size) and Paul, or either one, gives Alan his comeuppance!!!
Mike

[goliathlover]

Excellent story! Keep it up!

[worshipper]

This is a dream story. Love it. Can hardly wait for the new & ex to collide.

[tygrefyre]

So mindbogglingly HOT!!