Gum Story

[TheMM]

This is a story based on Chocomus' Gum comic. I wrote a story for it long ago, but looking at it again...that thing sucked (and not the good suck). So I totally re-wrote it, hopefully I've improved since writing that thing.
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Tyler paused in front of his gym, sighing at another day of working out, and gaining nothing. But at least he had plenty of muscular eye candy, especially in the guy at counter near the door...who never noticed him. Today was no different as Tyler walked by without him even looking up from whatever was he was reading.

Plopping down on a bench in the locker room, Tyler thought to himself, "He didn't even notice me. I'm...too small." This wasn't an uncommon thing either, as some people often times thought the 18 year-old was younger than he really was.

Staring at the floor, Tyler noticed a small wrapper lying on the floor. Picking it up, he read that all it said was: 'Body Changer Gum; Duration: 1 hour'. "Yeah, sure..." said Tyler, and popping the gum into his mouth, "But...nothing to lose either." He chewed for a minute, noticing the gum was rather bland. "Sure it was a joke, but I wonder...Let's see if I can make myself taller." With that Tyler thought about growing taller, closing his eyes to focus. As he thought about it, it happened. He quickly shot up just about a foot in height in mere moments, causing his shorts to ride up his legs and his shirt to show his midriff. "Oh my god! I'm really bigger! I can't believe it, I must be over six feet tall. I'm bi..." to which Tyler noticed his bone thin arm (even thinner after his recent bit of growing).

Giving a smirk, he decided to start from the bottom and work his way up. Focusing on his legs, Tyler's calves and upper legs beefed up with bodybuilder-like muscles, taking up a lot of space on and between his legs. His arms were next as they expanded with new muscle, and Tyler couldn't resist but giving an arm a hard flex. He then went to his torso as his abs 'caved' inwards into an impressive and deep six pack, along with newly meaty pecs. His cock was last to grow, and grow it did, taking up what little space remained in his shorts.

"Oh yeah, this is big! I always dreamt of being this big!" Tyler reached down to his hardening tool in his shorts, but stopped himself, "And...no! I've only got about 45 minutes left. It's better to show off for now."

With that, Tyler left the locker room, again passing the hottie at the counter, who quickly looked up as Tyler passed and about fell out of his chair staring after him, "Oh, now you notice me.." Tyler saw a guy running on a treadmill, and went over to get on a bike.
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Sam had another day at the gym. He honestly liked his toned physique, since it got him guys at the clubs, but still often wished he could be more muscular. So when this monstrous guy sat down on the bike next to him, his eyes just about bulged out of his head as he thought, "God! He's huge!"

Tyler glanced over at the other guy and thought, "Heh heh, my goodness, he's going to faint if he sees me flex. He's not too bad looking, but his arms need a bit more work." Even as Tyler thought that, Sam's arms bulged and flexed with increased muscle mass. "No way! So, not only me...This is gonna get fun." With that, Tyler beefed up Sam's entire body with muscle, straining Sam's clothing to the limit. By themselves, Sam's legs were rubbing up so much against each other, Tyler wondered how he was still running.

Sam continued to stare at this massive man, and wondered if he had seen him before, since his face seemed familiar. "I wonder why he's staring at me like that..." Sam took a look down at his newly improved body, and without thinking about it, stopped running. However, the treadmill hadn't stopped, and he flew off the back of it, slamming into the wall, causing Tyler to flinch. Tyler walked away after seeing that Sam wasn't really hurt, just dazed.
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Tyler walked over to the free weights section and picked up the heaviest dumbbell there, not bothering to look at the weight and sat down nearby, doing curls and causing a mighty vein to pop up on his bicep as he did so. He soon noticed a fellow doing bench presses with a spotter, and saw something 'extra', "Commando huh? That gives me an idea."

Nicknaming the bench press guy 'Commando 1' and the spotter, 'Commando 2'.

"What a huge guy! I hope I won't bone here. Why did I come commando today?" thought Commando 2.
"I can see it; that's so hot! Bad day to forget the jockstrap..." thought Commando 1.
"Don't bone, don't bone!" thought both together.

"Two at the same time, fun." Tyler then focused on both guy's cocks and balls, the former of which slowly slid down their short legs as they grew longer and thicker. As they grew far more hung, each man noticed the other man's snake in their pants, and didn't even realize their own growth.

"Oh my god!" said Sam from another area in the gym, who was flexing his heart out with his new muscle. "Amazing!"
"Now you realize. Heh, he seems to be having fun." thought Tyler as he watched Sam continue to flex for a bit. He was brought out of his voyeurism when he heard...

"Oh my god!"
"Yeah, yeah, now what?" said Tyler as he turned back, to see both Commando 1 and 2 with absolutely massive pieces of cock meat! "Shit!...I totally forgot about those two."
"Gosh! What happened to your cock dude!?" said Commando 1.
"MY cock? Look who's talking horsecock!" said Commando 2.
"Well....then...let's make them proportional!"

"What the?!" exclaimed Commando 2, as both men began to grow incredibly muscular, far faster than even Sam did. As they grew, they only got more excited with their growth, to the point where their already big poles quivered in ecstasy.
As both men burst out of their gym clothes, neither could help but they couldn't help but say "Awesome!" to their sudden and very unexpected change of circumstances. Commando 1 stuck the head of his massive cock in his mouth as he started to suck himself off, and with one arm rubbed the equally large cock of his companion. Commando 2 flexed his large beefy arms and rubbed his massive pecs, feeling and loving the hardness of it all.

"Aw...Only ten minutes left...I wanted to have a shower in this body while I still have it." thought Tyler as he looked back towards the still flexing Sam. Grinning, he made Sam grow again much like the two Commandos. As it grew, Sam's cock got harder, and when it was finally freed from it's stretched cloth restraint, it pushed outwards into the mirror in front of Sam so quickly it smashed into it, shattering part of it. However Tyler had timed it so that all of Sam's clothes would burst into pieces at the exact same time, which only excited Sam more.

Turning and walking away from his handiwork, back towards the locker room, he came across the staring guy from the counter, who had gotten up to see what all the ruckus was, and only could mumble out a "What the..."
Grinning, Tyler thought, "You'll see...Please, join the fun." Now the guy's already impressive body increased in mass. However, unlike the other three, Tyler didn't grow him as much. He continued to walk and whistle as the guy exclaimed over his newly enhanced body, but stopped and thought "Umm...not enough." Now the guy's eyes just about popped out of his head as he felt himself grow again and rip out of his clothes, just as big as the other three massive guys in the gym.
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Returning to the locker room, Tyler told himself, "Ok, time to grow!"

And boy did he grow himself this time. His already impressive arms exploded further, finishing off the sleeves of his nearly destroyed shirt; his pecs pushed outward in all directions, shredding his shirt into pieces which fluttered to the floor and revealed his even deeper and now eight-pack abs, with a super-tight and trimmed waist; his legs also pushed in all directions, taking up as much space as possible, and causing Tyler to adjust his stance; his calves were already so much they very nearly touched; his cock had amazingly stayed within his shorts, but just barely.

Tyler gave his bicep a flex, "Alright, not bad. But...uhn...yeah..." as Tyler grew his cock again, ripping it free as it's massive uncut head hung below his knees. "This is great!...More!"

Now got excited and it's cock followed his whim as it got hard, filled with blood, and began to curve upwards and grew even more as the rest of Tyler still grew more muscular. He was truly massive. There was no room on his body that wasn't taken up by muscle, and yet he continued to let himself grow. Bigger than any of the four guys out in the gym proper. He was very nearly monstrous...and very much so off balance as he forgot to change his stance some more and fell forward, landing on his still growing cock, which soon reached passed his head, and looked thicker than his skinny torso had been, and just about as tall as him.

"Huh...can't grow anymore. I guess time's up." said Tyler as his massive cock began to leak pre-cum, which would have been a couple orgasms for any 'regular' guy. Looking over, Tyler spied the gum wrapper he had simply dropped in his excitement and reached for it. That was a far more difficult feat as his muscles and cock pushed and shoved against each other, but still managed to grab it.

"Hmm, more writing?" thought Tyler as he brought the wrapper as close as possible (a rather impressive feat) and saw a bit of fine print he hadn't seen before. All it stated was, 'change permanent'. "Whoops! Oh well."

Resting his head and his massive, pulsing cock, Tyler thought as it continued to leak pre-, "Anyways, I think I can live with it."



The End.

[chocomus]

Thank you so much for doing this!!!!!!!!! its so cool!!! like a reversed fanart or fanfic or whatever is called.

I love it

[Esperanto Lives]

I remember this Chocomus comic from a while back!

The most significant detail was the guy that started to get an erection while going commando and the tip of his prong peeked out from the cuff of the gym shorts. Nice to see that image was preserved when novelized.

In a three or four page comic, there's very little information density, and from something like a story we expect more. For instance, in a comic that takes a minute to read we may not think about where something like bubble gum that gives guys boners at a distance comes from, though I remember thinking of that all while reading the story version.

Incidentally, now that you've set your hand to writing a couple times and seen it's not easy as it looks...want to treat us muscle growth authors with more respect, eh, MM? :-)

[TheMM]

Originally Posted by Esperanto Lives

I remember this Chocomus comic from a while back!

The most significant detail was the guy that started to get an erection while going commando and the tip of his prong peeked out from the cuff of the gym shorts. Nice to see that image was preserved when novelized.

In a three or four page comic, there's very little information density, and from something like a story we expect more. For instance, in a comic that takes a minute to read we may not think about where something like bubble gum that gives guys boners at a distance comes from, though I remember thinking of that all while reading the story version.

Incidentally, now that you've set your hand to writing a couple times and seen it's not easy as it looks...want to treat us muscle growth authors with more respect, eh, MM? :-)

I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the compliments...

...But Esperanto, I've written far more since even when I first made a story about Choco's comic. Most of it isn't posted in this area, but I have written quite a bit.

Also, when have I ever disrespected anyone, let alone authors specifically?

[timrain]

nice story

[BBMikeNJ]

Must find gum!