| ||||
| Welcome, Anonymous. You last visited: Yesterday at 11:53 PM | ||||||
| Post Your Muscle Growth Stories Registered Members Only: Post your own male muscle growth-themed stories here and get feedback from readers. 18+ ONLY! Stories posted here will eventually be added to the Evolution Story Archive. |
| Community Links |
| Social Groups |
| Contacts & Friends |
| Members List |
| Search Forums |
| Advanced Search |
| Find All Thanked Posts |
| Quick Links | ||||
| Today's Posts | ||||
| Mark Forums Read | ||||
| Open Contacts Popup | ||||
| User Control Panel | ||||
| Edit Signature | ||||
| Go to Page... |
 |
| | Thread Tools | Search this Thread | Rate Thread | Display Modes |
 February 3rd, 2010, 01:18 PM | |||
| |||
| Resolution (Part 7) Last edited by arpeejay; Yesterday at 04:21 PM.     |
| February 3rd, 2010, 02:04 PM | |||
| |||
| More? Really? :O After that superb(ly hot) ending? I guess I can go ahead and shout MOAAAAAR then. :P |
| February 3rd, 2010, 03:36 PM | |||
| |||
| Just one (I think) more! xoxo R |
| February 3rd, 2010, 04:15 PM | |||
| |||
| Down the toilet RPJ, You completely ruined this story with this inappropriate ending. The fact that you have Kai Greene beating out Branch Warren is just plain wrong! Wrong! WRONG! ABSOLUTELY WRONG! End on a more positive note and rewrite this version so that the protagonist doesn't stoop so low as to even consider giving some fictional character (Kai) the time of day. He should rise above his loss of love and find love in the heart of perhaps an adoring fan who also has high aspirations of becoming a massive bodybuilder... RPJ... you are a much more accomplished writer and I'm sure you can edit this ending and come up with something significantly better for #7. |
| February 3rd, 2010, 04:24 PM | |||
| |||
| Me oh my! (a) If you don't like the characters, rewrite them (in your head.) I could have done it the other way and gotten a similar reaction from someone else. It's known as "Your Mileage May Vary..." (b) It's not over yet, so there's no ending to "rewrite." Thanks for the feedback! xoxo Richard |
| February 3rd, 2010, 06:06 PM | |||
| |||
| Quote:
... Oh, god, I'm white-knighting for a writer. x3 But seriously, the story's fine. :V It'd be an issue if it were something totally redonkulous (like him boning Matt Damon or something; after all, we know Sarah Silverman's the one hitting that!). |
| February 3rd, 2010, 06:10 PM | |||
| |||
| Thanks, Richard, for a titillating chapter. I look forward to your next. Also, it's too bad there have to be sore losers even among readers of fiction. Keep up the great writing! Mike __________________ --It is not the strongest of the species that survives, nor the most intelligent that survives. It is the one that is the most adaptable to change. Charles Darwin |
|
| vBulletin Message | |
| Cancel Changes | |
« Previous Thread | Next Thread »
| Display Modes |
 Linear Mode |
 Switch to Hybrid Mode |
 Switch to Threaded Mode |
|
|
 Similar Threads | ||||
| Thread | Thread Starter | Forum | Replies | Last Post |
| Arp TOC | arpeejay | Post Your Muscle Growth Stories | 7 | October 23rd, 2009 11:24 PM |
| The Summer of 1981, Part 40: We're In This Love Together | Padraig | Post Your Muscle Growth Stories | 10 | September 18th, 2009 12:39 PM |
| The Summer of 1981, Part 39: Crying | Padraig | Post Your Muscle Growth Stories | 5 | September 13th, 2009 12:36 PM |
| The Summer of 1981, Part 37: Time | Padraig | Post Your Muscle Growth Stories | 4 | September 6th, 2009 09:26 PM |
| The Summer of 1981, Part 36: You Make My Dreams | Padraig | Post Your Muscle Growth Stories | 3 | September 6th, 2009 01:06 PM |
All times are GMT -7. The time now is 04:06 AM.
Addendum by archiver: This page was originally part of musclegrowth.org and exists as part of an overall archive under Fair Use. It was created on April 16 for the purpose of preserving the original site exactly as rendered. Minor changes have been made to facilitate offline use; no content has been altered. All authors retain copyright of their works. The archive or pages within may not be used for commercial purposes.