Resolution (Part 8)

[arpeejay]

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[wolfotehmoon]

...Hot damn.

[philat99]

Excellent, as always! How about a sequel - Max's Story? I'm always interested in technology based growth:

"I'm not a god," he replied. "And it's not magic, although I will remind you that any sufficiently advanced technology will appear to be magic to someone unfamiliar with that level of technology."

And with that, Max told Ben the whole story. Where he came from and when, who and what he was, why he was in East Buddha."


Mike

[chocomus]

good ending arpe!

[anglekindle]

Thanks for the ride.

[Mass Driver]

That was excellent. Funny how some things are unbearable, until you find the one to be with.
OK here's a true one to point up the stuff here.

Deepak Chopra is a spiritualist who started out as an endocrinologiist. He was on a radio talk show and he was talking about how powerful the mind is. He used the story of a research group that was trying to show how a high cholesterol is bad for your health. They had these rabbits on the diet and every group was dying young except for one group. The doctors in charge checked all the factors involved; food, water, clean cage, and all were the same for every group. So they observed one of the groups that died young and the group that didn't. The first group had a technician pull the rabbit out of the cage, clean it, change the water and put in new food, then put the rabbit back.

The group that was surviving and actually thriving, had a technician that, opened the cage, pulled the rabbit out and held it in his arms, He cleaned the cage, changed the water and put in new food, then he petted the rabbit, before he put the rabbit back.

That was the only difference. For the survivor rabbits, the act of being petted turned the bad food into ambrosia.
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Even if Max hadn't been a God or an alien or.. Just other. Him being there for Ben would have made it alright.

But I think your story is a lot better than just being there. Max took a chance, too. And it worked out for him, as well.

Keep Writing;

MD