Danny Gets Big - Part 5: Overtime

[jpmuscle]

This story is a sequel to the awesome story written by StudMscl

Before you begin, read parts 1 , 2 and 3 (even though it's called part 4).

Here's part 4 (or 5 if you want to get technical)

Danny Gets Big: Part 4 - Overtime
by MuscleMarveler

The 2 monsters followed their companion into the locker room. Jose's repeated glances over his shoulder at Danny and Mark just about sent him over the edge. Both of their massive bodies glistened in the sun, and swayed heavily back and forth as their muscles bunched and swelled with every step they took. "How does someone get that big? And there's TWO of them?" he thought. Before today, he was the biggest man by far at the beach, and he wondered why he'd never seen these 2 guys before.

The wet spot on Danny's speedo was getting bigger by the second as he followed Jose's hard, cut back and ass into the locker room. He was sure his cock was gonna burst through the front of the skin-tight fabric as his muscle power was being matched by his lust. He smirked as he looked over at his equally-sized friend, hinting with a nod towards Jose of his intentions. He took a glance down at his own massive pecs as they entered the locker room, flexing with anticipation.

As Jose and Mark rounded the corner, Danny stopped at the full-body mirror on the wall. he raised his arm for a bicep flex, and smiled again at his god-like power. He LOVED this body, and all the strength and power made him want even more!! He glanced around the corner to spot the 2 other studs at Jose's locker, and smiled bigger than he had all day.


Danny reached into the side of his speedo, and pulled out yet another packet, which had been securely held between the bunching waist of his speedo and his boulder-hard thigh. He ripped it open and emptied it on his tounge, and darted around the corner for the water fountain.

As he came into the site of Jose and Mark, he bent down to the water fountain. Mark was facing Danny's direction, and gasped at the torn half of one of the packets in Danny's right hand.

"Hey, man! Where'd that come from?"

"SURPRISE, SURPRISE! I thought you might find 'em, so i stashed one just in case."

As Danny finished speaking, his body stiffened as the effects of a third packet began to coarse through his body. He stepped his left foot even wider that it already had been, ready this time for the massive change he was about to go through.

Jose turned from his locker at the THUD Danny's foot made as it hit the ground, and the smaller man's eyes widened as watched Danny grow! His eyes shot nearly as wide as danny's pecs when he realized what he was witnessing!

Danny's already gargantuan chest muscles seemed ready to burst right through his skin as they inflated further out from his chest than thought humanly possible. His bullet-sized nipples were pushed out and forced to point down at the ground, while the thick veins pulsated across Danny's chest, infusing his body with more power and size.

His lats widened as his back grew, causing his arms to near 45 degree angles adding to his enormous upper arms balloning with pure muscle. Danny's whole torso grew upward and outward with each passing second, adding mass to his already huge abs. The thickening column of his torso elongated, making way for a fourth row below his chest, which in turn began to catch up to the other 3. His waist held it's tight form while his now 8 pack abs bulged and wrigled beneath his tight skin

A loud SNAP!!!! echoed off the walls as Danny's speedo finally gave way at the seam running down the his hip. His expanding quads neared the size of another whole human being as his calves stretched wider and thicker than ever thought possible. Another ripping sound accompanied the shredding of his shoes, making way for inhuman feet to spring free. Striations and Veins were aplenty as Danny's entire body grew upward and outward, filling his bone structure with all the muscle it could possibly hold, and then some.

Another gasp came from Jose and Mark as Danny's growing cock bounced free of it's prison. As the tattered remains of the swimsuit fell helplessly to the floor, his Gigantic cock pulsated with power only matched by his grapefruit-sized balls, which all appeared to be inflating along with the rest of his body.

After yet another slow, savory minute passed, the teenager had grown beyond anything imaginable. His hulking form was now dripping with hot sweat and glistened in the dim light of the locker room. Flexing was no longer the word as danny began to pump up ever overly-developed muscle in his body. His boulder-sized pecs bounced one at a time as he let out a deep, bellowing chuckle, watching the drool dripping from the lips of his puny onlookers. As he flexed, his thick cock began to fill with blood, while the smirk on his face grew with it.

Danny pounded the tile floor into submission as he saundered over to the scale, ready to see another near-100-pound gain. the dial groaned and turned around to 452 lbs, which Danny could barely see over his heaving chest.

"That's more muscle than i gained before, and even more than with the first packet. It must be from the lifting i did before." His back muscles shouted with power as he gave himself a double bicep pose, turning his head to watch his friends continue to salivate. Droping his arms back down, his hands surprisingly reaches all the way to his waist, and a hellacious Lat spread sent his companions into complete hypnosis. Now he REALLY wanted to know how much weight he could heft with the immense frame he now possesed.

Danny turned once again to see his comrades marching behind him. Their mixture of fear and lustful hunger caused them to remain in a trance as they took in the overly-endowed body standing before them. Danny made his chest bounce again, causing a shudder from both onlookers.

"GET OVER HERE AND WORSHIP ME!" is the only thing Danny could think to say, as he glanced down at his God-like body. His slaves followed his command, craning their necks as they approached. Danny's height had increased to accomodate the increased volume of his muscles, causing him to stand well over a head taller than Mark, while Jose's head only came up to the bottom of Danny's Mountain-sized pecs.

Jose's dazed look subsided slightly as he turned and darted back to his locker, only to return back to his former position with a rolled up tape measure in hand.

"I wanna see how big you are, d...d..dude!" He yammered, eagerly awaiting a reply.

"YEAH, THAT'S A GOOD IDEA!" roared Danny, his newly deepened voice shaking the brick walls of the Changing room.

Mark could no longer contain himself, and pulled down his own trunks and gripping his own awesome cock, which had been threatening to blow a load since he witnessed his friend's further transformation. Jose bent down and wrapped his tape around Danny's king-sized calf, and shouted out the result. "37 inches! NO FUCKIN' WAY, DUDE!!" he was now face to face with the biggest cock imaginable, and licked his lips while watching it fill with size. The gallon-sized sac beneath it heaved up and down with anticipation.

Controlling himself, Jose rattled off a second measurement as the tape circled Danny's immense thigh.

"49 inches!" Now he HAD to measure the thickening cock just inches from his face. Stretching the tape to the base, it surpassed 14 inches to the head, but pushed against the tape as it pulsated thicker and longer. stretching the tape around the thick shaft revealed a full 7 inches of girth.

"WAIT, BRO!! LET ME GET IT FULLY HARD!!" Danny bellowed as he gripped his ham-sized fist around his colossal member. He flexed some newfound internal muscles and caused it to spring to life. He knew he had total control of his loins, and flexed another muscle that would keep him from blowing a load. Pre-cum dripped down the shaft as it rose and rose, pointing towards the celing and pulsating with each stroke. Danny grunted as his manhood swelled to full size, pushing his giant fingers apart. "MEASURE IT, DUDE!!"

"IMPOSSIBLE!" Jose screamed. "19 FUCKIN' INCHES, MAN!!" The massive head was bigger than Jose's meaty fist, and dripping with fluid as danny got more and more turned on.

"NOW THAT'S A FUCKIN' COCK, MAN!" Danny licked his lips in anticipation of an orgazm.

"SUCK THAT BIG MAN-MEAT!!!" He was easily becoming comfortable with the power over his new friend, not to mention the rest of the galaxy. "MAKE ME CUM, BOY!!" he snarled, affirming that this older man was now an inferior creature.

The heavyweight bodybuilder kneeled before the wall of power before him, and wrapped his own large hand around the beast, to find his fingers could not go any more than 2/3 of the way around. He grabbed the tape again, and found that he was dealing with a 9 inch thick cock, dripping with fluid and nearing explosion. He dropped the tape and manage to fit the very tip of the dense head of this mammoth member between his lips.

Wrapping both hands around it, Jose stroked the beast while slidding the tip of his tongue into the long slit inside his mouth. Mark, who had already cum full force and nearly passed out, inched along the tile floor on his knees, mouth open and aiming for a mouthful of Dan's melon-sized balls! Danny continued to groan as he flexed his cock muscles, while also flexing his new-found inner control muscles, causing his massive sac to bounce up and down like a set of weights on a gym machine.

"CLIMB THIS MOUNTAIN, MARKY, AND MEASURE THE REST OF ME!!!" groaned danny, as his gargantuan body quivered and dripped with sweat. He flexed his new 8-pack abs, which now put the brick wall behind him to shame. Mark grabbed the tape and rose to his feet, now only glaring down slightly at his friends mack-truck pecks. He followed the pointing nipples down to a valley of bulging abodminals. He went into a trance as he followed the taper of the bottom pair, ending at the hairy stump of his tree-trunk cock. He had to turn his face upward to grin at friend's glowing face.

Danny flexed his waist while mark wrapped the tape around it. it measured a surprising 36", but looked smaller beneath his overstuffed torso. he slid the 6 foot tape up around Danny's lats, and found that it didn't even leave a foot at the end. "67 INCHES, MAN!" Danny's cock sputtered as he groaned with approval.

"THAT TAPE WON'T EVEN FIT AROUND MY SHOULDERS, WILL IT?"

"FLEX THOSE FUCKIN' ROCKY PEAKS, BRO!!" yelled a near-orgasmic Mark, panting and drooling as he wrapped the tape around Danny's Bicep. "37 1/2 inches! UNBELIEVABLE!!"

"MEASURE IT AGAIN!!!" Danny screamed as he flexed his arm even harder. The tape stretched to almost 40 inches!

"YOUR A FUCKING GOD, DANNY!!" Mark gasped, as his body quivered. His own large cock shot a load all over Danny's pec.

Wrapping his own bulging legs around one of Danny's was indeed a challenge, but the now-medium-sized Mark managed. He gripped Danny's pec, finding that his own might could not even squeeze it. It was literally hard as a rock, and full of bumbs and veins from over-filling the skin. Mark settled for rubbing Dan's now super sensitive nipples. All this worship was getting the Muscle beast so turned on, his precum drip cranked to full blast, much to Jose's enjoyment.

"I'M GONNA BLOW, DUDES!!"

Jose grinned as the cock between his hands began to pulsate faster, and got even warmer than it already was. Removing his lips just in time, Danny's balls rocketed into his groin as his cock twiched bigger than before!

"UUUUNNNNGGGGGGGHHH!!!!" Danny's massive lungs let out a quaking scream that literally shook the building they stood in. his cock shot load after load on the celing, causing the plaster to crumble from the force. Danny's servants licked their lips as he grabbed his cock and aimed for their faces. The impact of the less powerful blasts nearly knocked them over, and covered their entire faces with power-cum! Danny let out a godly chuckle as his friends became covered in his man juice. He couldn't believe the power his new body possesed, and he REALLY couldn't wait to get home to grab more sugar packets!!!!

[otkuman2003]

good god! good story...hope it continues...havent read a new part to this series in a looong time, and it still seems fresh and new every time i read the original 4 chapters...

[jpmuscle]

Originally Posted by otkuman2003

...hope it continues...

Me too!!! i hope i can find a way to write more to this story. i just HATE the way it ended, and still want to know more after what i wrote above!!!

This has got to be my favorite type of story. i also love it when a guy can control his own muscle growth, but some times authors go out of control with it. My next story is gonna be like that, along with a heterosexual theme, just to change it up. I wont make the charachter 8000lbs and 60 feet tall, though. That's a whole other story.

Thanks for noticing,
MuscleMarveler

[otkuman2003]

how about some jose growth...that would be hot to see...maybe a bit of force to it...like danny opening a packet and dumping the contents down his throat! GOD!!!!

[Bazorba]

*gets on hands and knees*

Pleeeeeeeeeeease write more, I'm begging you!

[Mad Dog]

I, too, really really hope there's more!

[n2size]

Hope you can write more very soon.

Great job. Thanks.

n2size

[Kymuscleboy]

I'm glad to see this story continued. It has always been one of my favorites. As far as how to continue it, at the end of the original Chapter 4 (3), Danny's dad was using FOUR packets in his tea. He's big and muscular to start, so his growth should be phenomenal. Maybe big Danny can come home to his even bigger Daddy.

[RyBearATL]

I had enjoyed the original Sugar Packets story a long time ago - thanks for continuing it!

[warlord1050]

This story should continue.

Best by the original writer or someone who is good at writing it.

Bellow a small idea of a plot to continue the story. Details should be added by the writer of the story.

chapter 6:
After Danny's last growth Mark feels anger and jealousy.
He used to be the total jock after all.
So Mark slips away and goes to Danny's house.
He enters and finds the a bag with sugar packages which were not really hidden. (this happens after Mark's father left the house, see later)
He takes them and goes to his apartment.

There he starts thinking:
1) he wants to become big enough to dominate all others, especially Danny.
2) he wants to experience the ecstatic feeling of the muscle growth again that he felt the previous time, but now he wants the feeling to be stronger.
For this he needs at least three sugar packages.
So three packages it would be for now.

He takes three sugar packages plus a large pack of flour and heads of downtown.
There is a small gym known to house big bodybuilders and powerlifters, that was recently completely renovated.
Mark went there once with a big bodybuilder friend of his.
The gym should be the perfect place:
- all walls of the training room covered with man size mirrors.
- the newest gym equip on the marked.
- and a room full of people into muscle (aka future worshipers).

Mark mixes the three sugar packages with the flour in a glass of water.
The flour will make it harder to digest the sugar packages so the sugar is released in his blood system slower, spreading the growth over approximately an hour. After all, the three packages at once could be too much for his body to take all at once, and this way he can enjoy the ecstatic longer.

Mark drinks the solution and enters the gym.
The next hour he will spend his time flexing, lifting, cumming and being worshiped by the other gym members while he grows.
His growth should be as followed:
The effect of the first package is similar to the growth of Danny when he took his third package.
For all packages after that the growth is drastically different:

The rate of growth of his muscle size, height and "package" size decreases drastically compared to the initial growth.
This is to prevent the body form taking on dimensions that are too impractical (for moving the body or becoming so high that he doesn't fit in buildings any more and becomes a giant (unwanted), instead of a human).

The expected strength and weight increase during the growth stay on track.

To compensate for the slowed growth rate described above:
- the muscle density will increase at a higher rate and the muscles will not stop becoming harder and more defined, beyond imagination, during the entire growth process.
- the sexual endurance/capabilities will keep increasing at a high rate.

After the hour, Mark flexes a large time in the mirrors.
His strength is big enough that he can curl a small car a few times.
Then he takes of to Danny's house (he expects that Danny went home after his adventure at the beach) to show off his new size and humiliate him once again.

chapter 7:
Danny goes home after his adventure at the beach.
There he finds an empty house.
On the kitchen table he finds a full glass and a quickly written note from his dad:
There has been an emergency at his dad's work and he has been paged up to come immediately. Danny roles his eyes, this is already the 4th time this month.
Danny is thirst and decides to drink up the glass that his father left behind, while leaving in a hurry.
Then he feels a strange familiar feeling, the feeling he felt before when growing but this time much stronger.
Alerted by the feeling Danny runs to the garage, where there is a big mirror on the wall.

Barely arrived the growth kicks in.
Because Danny took all the four packages at once without mixing it with another compound, the sugar enters his bloodstream almost all at once.
Danny initially feels both fear and eager anticipation because of the expected extend of the muscle growth that is about to come.
During the growth that feeling is replaced by a feeling of extreme ecstasy and at the same time extreme pain by the very high rate of change making his muscle feel like they can explode out of his skin any moment.
The growth is entirely similar to the growth Mark experiences during his second and third sugar package growth in chapter 6, because of the same reasons mentioned there.

five minutes later the changes are over.
Danny checks out his body in the mirror (as far as this is possible, because his body is wider then the mirror) and then tries out his strength on the car in the garage. This is a large pickup truck.
He finds out he is just strong enough to curl the pickup truck a few times.

Then the doorbell goes.
Danny opens and is surprised to finds a big Mark smiling from ear to ear before his door.
Upon seeing Danny, Mark face changes from smile to complete disbelieve and then a combination of fear and anger.
What had happened to Danny, that can't be possible, didn't he steal the sugar packages form his house?
...

[sexiscriptor]

Originally Posted by warlord1050

The rate of growth of his muscle size, height and "package" size decreases drastically compared to the initial growth.
This is to prevent the body form taking on dimensions that are too impractical (for moving the body or becoming so high that he doesn't fit in buildings any more and becomes a giant (unwanted), instead of a human).

not to be a jerk, but laaame :P

firstly, one should never specify lessening growth--we're a crowd that wants one thing and one thing only: MORE ;P

secondly, who says Mark's becoming a giant would be unwanted? that's a rude assumption to make, especially since you're not the writer. frankly I think that'd be plenty hot--and, from his comments, it seems JP doesn't mind height either...

but thirdly--if you're so sure how this story should go, why aren't you off writing your own story? it's less presumptuous and much more charitable :P and those both reduce the likelihood of getting flamed
--Ille

[Kit Werecat]

I liked the descriptions of growth and size in this particular phase of development. As has been already said, this story has been left for a long time, and just when it could yield some great things. Thanks for starting it up again.

[warlord1050]

Originally Posted by sexiscriptor

not to be a jerk, but laaame :P

firstly, one should never specify lessening growth--we're a crowd that wants one thing and one thing only: MORE ;P

secondly, who says Mark's becoming a giant would be unwanted? that's a rude assumption to make, especially since you're not the writer. frankly I think that'd be plenty hot--and, from his comments, it seems JP doesn't mind height either...

but thirdly--if you're so sure how this story should go, why aren't you off writing your own story? it's less presumptuous and much more charitable :P and those both reduce the likelihood of getting flamed
--Ille

the goal of posting a proposal for a continuation is to keep the story going in the first place as nobody adds to the story any more without one (look at last posting date of last part)
But it's nothing more then a proposal, so you don't have to be so irascible.

The reason for decreased growth are specifically mentioned.

It seems the original writer meant this story to go on for quit some chapters, and looking at the growth rate that one package can cause, taking on a few more packages would render the taker so large (at the current growth rate in the story) that they become immobile or so large that it is not practically more to continue the story further at all after one chapter (they are largest men on earth and don't fit in any house any more and have no competition whatsoever).
And the growth rate doesn't stop, only decreases, so they still get bigger.

Slowing the growth rate allows the story to go on for longer.
Making it so more packages are needed to grow and more material to write about.

And most importantly, you forgot that the growth rate decrease can be ... temporarily.

In future chapter they can still grow very big by increasing the amount of packages consumed or other factors can enter the story to increase the growth rate again.

The story will probably end with people that grew very very much as a matter of fact, and nobody minds that.

[ushersdick]

Jesus Christ!!

That's hot!!

[jpmuscle]

Originally Posted by ushersdick

Jesus Christ!!

That's hot!!

Thanks for bumping my story, as I have not contributed for a while and it's nice to see people still enjoying my work

check out my other "homage" stories:

Massium 2.0 part 1 of 4 (links to other chapters: 2 3 4)

Magic Posing Strap (also has a part 2)

*Both stories contain heterosexual themes, but I have come to the conclusion that they can be overlooked. You be the judge...

[warlord1050]

nice to see the original writer.

any chance this story get's some more attention (hope it continues still for a long time)?

you are free to use my plot suggestion, but it's nothing more then that.

As the owner always decides what happens to the story of course.