The Wide Prairie Sky-- Conclusion

[umlerian49]

Story withdrawn.

[Hue]

Aw I'm sad to see it end. But I will say that this has been a very, very good read my friend. My compliments to the author.

[Demandred]

Thanks for writing! I do like a happy ending. I hope that we get to read more soon.

[sketlover]

Just brillant ! Thanks for writting such a good story.

[Ragetiger]

That was a great ending. Seems that all the loose ends were finally tied up, but that one mysterious person is still out there.

I hope his senior years works out for the best and don't forget to trashcan the freshmen ^^v

[hexdog3f8h]

I agree, this was an excellent finish to this story. Just enough closure to fit together seamlessly.

[Mass Driver]

Oh my God. You hit them all. End with a laugh.
I hope you have a lot of stories in mind, because that was just excellent!!!
It can stand alone or be the start of some great stories with the same characters.
I hope you follow your heart and imagination.
They got you here, and this is one fine place.
Keep Writing.

MD

[silvershadow]

I really hope there is a second part to this story it is so great! Plus I personally wanted him to freak out that football jock from the first half. xD

[arpeejay]

Outstanding story: sexy, funny, and sweet! Kudos and many thanks!

xoxo

Richard

[Reeza]

Very nice! This has been a pleasant journey. Thanks for all of your work and persistence.

[Silas]

Thank you for not only writing a great story, but finishing it as well. I'm sure you need a break but I hope we see more from you in the future.

[Jack of Blades]

Just wanted to say that was one of the most truly enjoyable, fun, sexy and exciting stories I've read in a Long long while. The suspense kept up all the way to the end, and it was a fantastic conclusion. Can't wait to hear about his senior year!

[umlerian49]

Originally Posted by Hue

Aw I'm sad to see it end. But I will say that this has been a very, very good read my friend. My compliments to the author.

I can understand that. These characters almost seem real to me by now. Don't worry, there'll be more.

Originally Posted by Demandred

Thanks for writing! I do like a happy ending. I hope that we get to read more soon.

You promised to write more, too. Remember, you were one of my inspirations.

Originally Posted by sketlover

Just brillant ! Thanks for writting such a good story.

Thanks!

Originally Posted by Ragetiger

That was a great ending. Seems that all the loose ends were finally tied up, but that one mysterious person is still out there.

I hope his senior years works out for the best and don't forget to trashcan the freshmen ^^v

You know what they say-- always leave 'em wanting more.

Originally Posted by hexdog3f8h

I agree, this was an excellent finish to this story. Just enough closure to fit together seamlessly.

I have to admit, driving all the plot points is like the proverbial herding cats.

Originally Posted by Mass Driver

Oh my God. You hit them all. End with a laugh.
I hope you have a lot of stories in mind, because that was just excellent!!!
It can stand alone or be the start of some great stories with the same characters.
I hope you follow your heart and imagination.
They got you here, and this is one fine place.
Keep Writing.

MD

One thing I've come to realize is that the story is best if I write what I want instead of what I think others might like.

Originally Posted by silvershadow

I really hope there is a second part to this story it is so great! Plus I personally wanted him to freak out that football jock from the first half. xD

Something like that-- you'll just have to wait and see.

Originally Posted by arpeejay

Outstanding story: sexy, funny, and sweet! Kudos and many thanks!

xoxo

Richard

You're very welcome.

Originally Posted by Reeza

Very nice! This has been a pleasant journey. Thanks for all of your work and persistence.

I appreciate the support.

Originally Posted by Silas

Thank you for not only writing a great story, but finishing it as well. I'm sure you need a break but I hope we see more from you in the future.

Well I'm nothing, if not persistent.

Originally Posted by Jack of Blades

Just wanted to say that was one of the most truly enjoyable, fun, sexy and exciting stories I've read in a Long long while. The suspense kept up all the way to the end, and it was a fantastic conclusion. Can't wait to hear about his senior year!

Hmm... Makes me want to be a writer!

[Steven]

Sorry, I"m getting to the conclusion a bit late, but I must say it?s been great from start to finish! Like someone else said, I too feel as though I know the characters personally?that says a lot! I?m glad Bob didn?t turn out to be a bad guy?and that everyone (the good guy?s) survived the storm, and now life is good! I only wished, whilst that tornado was busy wreaking havoc, destroying buildings, hurling people about, bending pipes and over-turning trucks, that it would have taken time to rip off Alex?s clothes! LOL
Thanks for this supreme story, and hope to read more from you in the future!

[Mdlftr]

Muscle stories with humor=winning combination!

Great series! Well done! Enjoy your respite!

We'll be here waiting when you get back!

Mdlftr

[TheHugeGunz4u]

This was a fantastic series. You are a very accomplished writer...

[JP71]

It was truly an unforgettable story. I loved it for so many reasons, Alex's humble nature for one. I am really glad that Bob turned out to be genuine, and it was a humorous twist indeed, when the money in the safe turned out to be Farley's life-savings.

In the part where Alex started weeping upon seeing his friends Patty, Frank and Sammy again, I began blubbering. I'm not afraid to admit it. It's a pity that everything didn't go smoothly at the farm. Frank still has a chip on his shoulder. Luckily Alex was there to save the day. I guess Sammy can't help his flirtatious nature.

I also found the scenes with Ryan, especially the love scene under the stars, beautifully written and just arousing enough for me NOT to blow a load, which would have taken me out of the story a little. Still tho, I had my fun with the novella at more than one other occasion. I especially love that you made Ryan a super-hot Asian (I LOVE Asian men), and I sort of pictured him as Takeshi Kaneshiro, one of the sexiest men alive.

But what shall become of Alex now? He is a unique being, a god amongst insects, and yet he doesn't behave with a superior and self-obsessed demeanour. Sure, he has his horny "Hol-eee-shit!!!" moments alone in front of a mirror, especially after a growth-spurt. I was expecting another MASSIVE spurt during the cyclone, but I'm satisfied with how you wrapped everything up. He's over 700lbs now, so he is a massively huge guy as it is.

But senior year is now upon him. You could really take a sequel in any number of directions. That's the power of fiction and a limitless imagination, I guess.

Congratulations on a superb achievement. The Wide Prairie Sky is not only one of my favourite muscle-growth stories ever, but also one of my favourite pieces of fiction. You should seriously consider getting it published. I gave this to my nephew to read (he's a hetero dad of 25 years old), and even HE can't put it down. You really have a winner with this one, my dear man.

Hope to see you make a big splash in the muscle-growth genre in the near-future.
xxx

[Ender]

Based on the title I had figured this was a going to be a cowboy story, the idea Brokeback Mountain with muscle didn't appeal to me so I skipped reading it when it started. Unlike most of the people here I'm actually turned off by the sex scenes. My interest is the story, muscle growth and how the characters deal with the changes the growth cause to the grower and the people around them.

I got into reading "Big New World: The Continuing Adventures of Alex, the Teenage Musclebeast" and fell in love with the character of Alex Johnson. As I admitted in a comment I posted in one of the "Big New World" threads like Alex I'm an Aspie, which is likely the reason I more interested in the story and growth aspect than the sex. Umlerian49 does a pretty good job of capturing the somewhat disordered thought process... The Aspie is still in Alex at the end of the story he just deals with it better. He still makes boneheaded Aspie choices but he doesn't get so wrapped up in internal dialog that he goes catatonic but he still needs alone time to unwind after he's been stressed out.

I really liked this story and it was extremely well crafted great grammar and spelling, a well thought out plot. It actually makes some the work of even the most respected writers here look bad. For a first attempt it is truly remarkable.

Maybe if I had grown to be a major hunk instead of a short chubby nerdling I'd have more interest in sex. I know that it would make looking in the mirror and taking showers a lot more fun.

Ender

[philat99]

What a fantastic series! Great refreshing characterization, dialogue, and descriptions. It's also wonderful to discover the beginnings of Alex. I had begun with the sequel by mistake, so this series became a wonderfully revealing flashback.
Mike