Muscular Beach Boy

[R Chris Cooper]

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[kastawaykid]

I think you have a great knack for telling stories. However, when we read these stories, I for one, enjoy to read about the change happening in real time! What is the importance of the play or the book when all of the action happens off stage or away from the character.

I want to read more of your stories, but give us details!

[R Chris Cooper]

Originally Posted by kastawaykid

I think you have a great knack for telling stories. However, when we read these stories, I for one, enjoy to read about the change happening in real time! What is the importance of the play or the book when all of the action happens off stage or away from the character.

I want to read more of your stories, but give us details!

Point taken. I understand about "watching" the muscle growth but the only way I could have done that was to have the main character witness Jack growing. I wanted the element of the surprise of the reveal and the growing descriptions had to suffer because of that. There is always the next story. I promise to add some hot muscle growth just for you my faithful readers.

Coop

[muscleboi25]

It was a beautiful story. The details were both erotic and romantic!! Thanks for sharing!!