You Got Male 1.1

[tattcub]

Hey guys next short section...
I promise the change is coming...
saturday will be a good day to pop back...in the meantime



Okay so he?d played with all the drop downs and had seen his pictures swell so he looked a bit liked a cross between Ryan Reynolds crossed with Chris Hemsworth with a lot of flex Lewis thrown in for good measure (definite all fantasy figures here)
The last menu was for rendering it gave various options, he chose real time and wanted it to take a few days just so he could live out the fantasy a little by being able to check in on the page and see how his fantasy self was coming along.

It was making him qute hot and he new this was going to fuel a few fantasies when he was alone at home later with his own pc.
He pressed the enter key.
***Transmitting data***
Are you sure you want to make these changes permanent Y/N?
Y?he entered (well d?uh) he chuckled admiring the fact that whoever wrote the page was taking it so seriously.
***Permanent changes will take at least 24 hours***
***Constructing reality matrix***
23.59.50..
The clock on the screen began to countdown?

Simon chuckled to himself. He closed the programme and decided to get on with his work.
He found he just couldn't concentrate. Kept on getting distracted by the simplest of things like his mind kept drifting off. He felt a little sore. He wondered if he was sickening for something.
He decided to call it quits and leave early. It was friday, he'd often covered for the girls. He waved goodbye as he left heading out to the car park. He got to his car and funbled the keys into the lock almost dropping them. He felt like he was wearing thick gloves.
His hands felt stiff.

Yeah he was definately coming down with something...

[mom bab]

Keep it coming! :-D

[Lucas88]

Nice! I like the "He felt like he was wearing thick gloves. His hands felt stiff" description. Keep up that kind of impact-on-the-body description as the change happens and you'll have a hit. Growth doesn't always have to be an orgasmic ballooning process...sometimes the "no pain, no gain" approach and the orgasm at the finished results is just as hot or hotter.

One thing...as hot as all 3 of your "fantasy figures" are, they're very different body types. Tall and lean muscle...tall and bulky but not bodybuilder muscle...short and BUILT muscle...it's kind of hard to visualize what you're going for here (though some authors like to leave it up to the reader's imagination and some readers prefer their own interpretation). Personally, my imagination is fine...I'd like to get an idea of what YOU see in your head.

Just some thoughts to maybe trigger more thoughts for you, not requirements by any means. Looking forward to more!

[cutlerfan]

Please keep writing! Very intriguing so far!

[tattcub]

hey guys thanks for the thoughts so far...

as far as the different body types i was going for was about the various aspects of the three guys i mentioned ...i'll try and make it clearer...

I'm enjoying the process so far. glad you are too

thanks

TC