Writing buddy--looking for constructive criticism.

[spokenthunder]

I'm not one to post here often--I'm mostly a lurker. However, I'm working on a somewhat muscle-growth story and was wondering if anybody would be willing to read what I have so far. It's a bit out-of-the-ordinary, so you'd have to be open to different writing styles and themes. Please feel free to leave me a message here, private message, or IM me.

I'm really somebody can help me out. I've had a couple people take a look at it, but I need someone who'd be willing to give suggestions and constructive criticism. I'm a bit nervous about posting it on the Forum, but my goal is to eventually post it.

Thank you, and I hope to hear from you soon.

[Heillder]

Could always try with me. I don't know when I'll have time to read it but, I'll give it a try! Send the link in PM to download it and I'll do my best to criticize.

[mimolover]

How about a we write a story about a serial killer that keeps his victims on full display where he dismembers them and analysis their remains one piece at a time until they cant take it anymore and commit suicide.

He calls himself.....[COLOR=DarkRed]The Deconstructionist [/COLOR]

[Ogun]

*clonks mmolover with Hyperspace Mallet* I'd be glad to take a SERIOUS look, Thunder.

[werewolfmuscle]

I write as well. I'd be happy to help a fellow author out.

[airnel]

Interested here add me [email protected]