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Old April 20th, 2012, 08:51 AM
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Untitled Episode 1

***So I've decided to unpost this story. Mods please delete this thread. I'll rework the story and postpone putting it on here until further notice.***

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Old April 20th, 2012, 11:53 AM
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Love it! Keep it coming!
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Old April 20th, 2012, 12:46 PM
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Haha, please do know that the quotation marks are for things litteraly being said

“No Craig, he went to the store to get some groceries for tomorrow night. Gauge said sheepishly”
should be
“No Craig, he went to the store to get some groceries for tomorrow night," Gauge said sheepishly.
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“What the hell I yelled out softly to myself!!!”
should be
“What the hell?!" I yelled out softly to myself

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Yeah I know, I really didn't proof read it. But I wanted it on the forum before I forgot about it.
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Thanks for pointing this out to the writer. Simple mistakes like these really interfere with my reading and enjoyment.
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That was fucking hot.
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Unpost it? Why? It was great!
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I'd unpost a story too if simpletons were pointing out SIMPLE mistakes like a misplaced quotation mark or two. Really guys?!?!?! Hot story Musclehead!!
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