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He Won't Stop Growing! Part 2

He Won't Stop Growing! Part 2
"Physical Education"



Brennan sat his classes that day with a raging hard on unable to get the image of his little brothers donkey dick and huge muscled body out of his head. He felt disgusted with himself not only because he was lusting after a guy, but this guy was his own little brother. The bell rang for the last period of the day and Brennan?s favorite class, P.E. He quickly adjusted his boner and packed up his stuff walking down the hallway?s entering proudly into the locker room, suddenly stopping

?No..?

Brennan couldn?t believe this was happening, no one?s supposed to have this much bad luck.. There was Wes standing there in just his basketball shorts, flexing for everyone with a huge cocky grin. Brennan frowned and headed to his locker watching some of the football jocks touch Wesley?s perfect biceps like he was some kind of superstar. Brennan opened up his locker glancing up at Wesley getting a good look at him, realizing he looked even a bit bigger than this morning. He turned away laughing knowing it was impossible, but as he slipped on his workout clothes.. curiosity got the better of him. He slowly looked up and took a second glance dropping his mouth as Wesley shifted his body in the light. Instead of having just a little patch of hair between his pecs, his entire torso was covered in a light coating of his dark masculine hair. How was this happening, how was he growing so Fast? He started to look at the rest of his body with careful detail seeing that his neck was thicker, his shoulders were broader, everything looked a little bit bigger than before!. He stood there filled with jealousy watching one of Wesley?s middle school friends come up to him in aw like everyone else

?Dude Wes how the hell Did you get so Big! And in only one year??

?I Don?t know Dude But I feel Like I?m getting bigger by the day Grrr Its So fucking awesome!?

?You used to be so skinny though dude and now you have a god damn 8 pack! How do you do it??

?Couple hundred crunches a day or so! I always thought a 6 pack was never good enough! And chicks love this shit?

?That?s for sure?You should Join the football team bro?

?Hell Yeah dude! Besides you guys need at least one big Guy on the team Haha! Oh man and check out my legs they have been growing like crazy! And I?ll I?m doing is running!?

Wes pulled up his basketball shorts revealing his diamond cut ox legs, Shaking them and flexing them hard like bodybuilder?s do in the pump room. Brennan kept staring at his younger brother like a dog, glancing down at the massive bulge between his perfect thighs. He slowly palmed his cock remembering Wes in the shower

?Shit Dude?

Brennan flinched hearing his friend John come up behind him. He turned around hiding his bulge

?Hey John?

?Sooo? When did your little brother get so Huge?!!?

?I don?t really wanna talk about it, I?m kinda pissed?

?Dude I would be too he?s Huge! He?s Definitely going to outgrow you in no time?

?Would You Shut the Fuck Up dude!?

Brennan slammed his locker closed and left the locker room. He waited in the wrestling room for the rest of his class to join him hearing Wesley?s cocky laugh enter the room. The gray t-shirt he was wearing was practically painted on his chest showing every detail of his muscled torso, and his arms took up ever inch of the tiny sleeves. Brennan could only dream of looking so good, moving his eye?s down to the blue basketball shorts that were almost completely filled up from this growing legs. Wesley did a couple stretches making his clothes strain and snap, every now and then flexing just to remind himself how huge he was. The coach finally entered the room and told everyone to sit down

?Ok Everyone, Were not going to be doing any lifting today but instead were going to have physical fitness test! First were going to measure your height and your weight. You will write this down on the chart I?m handing out to all of you. Do NOT Lose this! Sense this is a weight lifting class Were going to be tracking your results, and how much your lifting. After your done getting measured and weighed I want you t start stretching and get ready to run the mile! Everyone get in a line by alphabetical order behind the scale?

Brennan got up and stood next to Wes glancing down at his perfect bubble butt. Wes Turned around in laughed

?This is so great your in the same class Brennan, cause now you can watch me outgrow you Haha?

Everyone got in the line and started writing down there height and weight. Brennan knew this was his opportunity to remind his little brother who was still bigger in the family. He stepped on the scale the coach reading out loud.

?6?2 and.. 210 Pounds! Nice Brennan?

?Thanks Coach?

Brennan got off and started writing down his results on the piece of paper, waiting for Wesley?s results. The muscle-bound teen stood on the scale pushing out his chest making his shirt impossibly tight for the coach to see.

?Ok Wes your? 6?1 and 202 Pounds?

Brennan?s pencil dropped to the floor watching his little brother turn towards him with a huge grin. He couldn?t believe it, 202 pounds, and he was so ripped! Brennan was pretty muscular too but he had some fat on him for the football team.. Wes walked passed Brennan and chuckled

?Looks Like I?ll be there bigger brother soon haha! Fuckin Alpha Male?

Wes flexed his biceps proudly and walked away writing down his results on the piece paper. He watched Wes start talking with his friends like they were his own, Wanting more than ever to hit the weights so he could show Wesley Up.. Brennan headed over and started talking to John about the football team finally hearing the coach telling everyone to go onto the track. John and him there stood on the line when saw Wes come up next to him. He turned with a killer smile and snickered

?Good Luck Bro, Your gonna need it?

?GO?

The Coach yelled and Brennan went sprinting off running as fast as he could showing off like he usually did. He smiled coming around the corner when he saw Wes along side of him still continuing to gain speed. His smiled turned into a frown still running as fast as he could watching Wes slowly began to Pass him going faster and faster. As he continued to run father ahead Brennan got a view of Wesley?s tight basketball shorts rising up showing off his huge ox legs he was running with. Brennan couldn?t take his eye?s off of them never seeing such definition before, with every head of muscle bulging intensely against his hairy skin. Brennan tried picking up speed watching his little brother get farther and farther away, staring at his tight ass squeeze against the rising shorts. Brennan didn?t understand what was wrong with him, he used to be the fastest one on the team. He pushed himself to the limit trying to catch up to his brother sweating like crazy going around on their second lap. He finally came within a foot of his brother watching him turn around and laugh.

?Oh You wanna Race Big Bro??

Wesley laughed and sprinted off ahead of him like a machine on over drive. The young muscle jock felt like he was unstoppable as he started to lap people on the track.. He ran even faster feeling his shorts start to dig up into his ass, straining up against his massive package making his cock become hard. Everyone stared in shock watching the huge teen run around with massive boner swinging back and fourth in his shorts. He laughed seeing there faces when he caught a glimpse of His older brother half way around the track thinking how hot it would be if he lapped him too, showing everyone who was really the Best!. He felt a surge of energy in his body as he picked up speed, passing more and more people. He looked down at his legs loving how unbelievably huge and hairy they were, grinning at the sight of his massive manhood tenting up his shorts for all to see. He ran even faster feeling his shirt began to strain against his chest, his shorts becoming even tighter. He approached Brennan hearing something tear feeling the cold air caress his right nipple. Brennan turned around and saw Wesley behind him, bulging with power, his right pec ripping through his shirt.

?Oh shit..?

Brennan panicked unable to run any faster barely having enough energy to finish the lap. He saw the coach up ahead knowing it was Wesley?s final lap, letting out a sigh that it would be over. He sprinted past the coach shortly after hearing Wesley?s Mile time but Welsey wasn?t stopping. He was still there right gaining on him with that huge evil smiling, bulging with veins and muscle. Wesley was craving power wanting to dominated everyone in the class, which included lapping his older brother. Brennan Looked behind feeling his heart race out of control watching Wes get closer to him. His gigantic body was glued even tighter to the shirt, looking like some sort beast ready to be unleashed from his clothes. Wes grinned looking at Brennan?s frightened face feeling his shirt tear even further open, almost like it was getting tighter by the minute.

Brennan saw the finish line using all the energy he had left in him to keep going. Wes snickered watching his Big brother struggle sweating like a pig knowing it was time to unleash his remaining energy.

?See You Later BIG BRO?

Wes laughed feeling an explosion of energy sprinting past Brennan feeling his chest suddenly surge ripping the shirt to shreds unleashing his Muscled Chest in front of everyone! He roared past the finish line flexing his muscle and grunted loudly knowing he had just lapped everyone in the whole class. Brennan stood there hearing his time being called feeling like he was going to pass out, staring at Wesley who didn?t even break a sweat. Wes grabbed his water bottle and started spraying water all over his chest winking at the girls in the other class. He threw them a killer smile and flexed his right arm, his shorts looking like posers showing off his fully hard erection and giant cum filled balls They all giggled looking at the blue eyed jock, practically cumming in there pants as he gave them a personal show. Brennan panted like crazy grabbing his water bottle looking at his brother?s ripped shirt on the track

?Why did his shirt rip off like that? Shirts don?t just rip off.. unless?

Brennan paused slowly turning his head almost afraid at what he was going to see. As he looked upon the muscle bound teen he knew it happened, there was no denying it. He didn?t just look a little bigger, but a whole lot Bigger! Taller, Wider, Thicker, More Muscle, More Hair! His not so Little Brother had grown on the track, and just By Running! He stood there watching Wes walk towards him now completely eye level grabbing the shredded shirt off the ground.

?Guess We know Who?s The best huh Bren?

?Hey Wes? The coach came behind Wes and patted him on the shoulder ?You have got to be the fastest and Biggest sophomore I have ever seen?

?Oh Thanks Coach! Good thing I brought an extra Shirt Haha?

?Listen Wes you ever thought about Joining the football team??

Brennan watched Wes and the coach walk off together talking. Wesley?s tan muscular back started to head into the school leaving Brennan on the track with the rest of the class. The coach came back out a couple minutes later leading everyone back inside to do even more test. Everyone walked in to already stretching with his new shirt which was barely holding in his muscle?s looking like under armor. Wes joked to everyone

?I?ll try not to flex this time haha?

?Ok Everyone Settle Down, Get into the Push Up Position! Now when I say down you go down, when I say Up You Go Up! Got It! Were going to see how much you can, before you pass out. Ready.. Set.. Go?


Brennan started his pushup?s feeling more humiliated then ever hearing the coach count the number out loud each one getting higher then the next. Most the class was done after 20 except for the football jocks. He pushed harder and harder feeling his body start to weaken as the coach counted past 80. He breathed heavily looking over at Wes who looked better then ever. He couldn?t let him win again.. Brennan started only going half way down, feeling his muscle?s get weaker with every push. He looked over at Wes listening to the number 100 go by. He couldn?t believe that his brother wasn?t even breaking a sweat, or look exhausted. The coach started picking up pace with the numbers, going past 110. Brennan could barely hold himself up as he watched his brother?s thick defined arms push him up and down with absolutely no struggle, letting his obscene pecs touch the wrestling mat. Brennan collapsed hearing the number 119 go by Wes looking over at him with a grin still going up and down faster and faster showing off in front of the class. The coach finally stopped counting at 150 watching Wes with eager eye?s push up and down continuously. Everyone started cheering him on counting with him as he went full speed. Brennan watched Wesley?s body in total envy looking at the heavy cock dropping against the basketball shorts, touching the floor as he went down. The shirt inched up from his muscular butt rising up his back, the hairy trail starting to sprout out of his shirt as everyone counted past 210. Brennan knew it was happening again. Wes was starting to grow

?No stop..?

Brennan thought to himself painfully watching his little brother?s shirt seem to get tighter around his chest. Wes turned and snickered at his big brother realizing he was just about to do twice as many as Brennan could, loving the way everyone was watching him become the strongest teen in the school.
They class chanted his name as he started to slow down finally collapsing on the floor at 254 Pushups.

Wes got up proudly feeling his shirt slide up past the perfect v-shape at the bottom of his ripped 8 pack. He hit a enormous pose flexing his huge 17 inch biceps ripping his sleeves to shreds absorbing everyone?s attention as they cheered him on. He looked over at Brennan pointing at his cock with a grin.

?Shit Brennan your Brother is a Beast Dude!?

John mutterd to Brennan who just stood there watching him become the man he had always wanted to be. The rest of the class Brennan watched as Wes beat him test after test on everything waiting for the class to be over, finally hearing the bell ring with relief.. He quickly grabbed his clothes and left school early. He drove off in his truck feeling like he was in the twilight zone or something. Everything in less then 24 hours had turned completely upside down and it was all because of Wes. As he headed to the gym the question still poked him in the back of his head, How was he growing? The whole time he lifted weights the notion of his brother being some kind of muscle mutant became engraved into his head. It actually made him crazy jealous, and curious at the same time, especially wondering if Wesley knew..



As soon as Brennan got home he headed upstairs badly needing a shower but as he approached his room he started hearing a load grunting noise. It sounded like Wes except.. Deeper.. He opened the door to his room hearing it get louder coming from the bathroom that connected his room with his brothers. He pressed his ears up against the door listening to the grunts which sounded almost beastly making him immensely curious. He grabbed the handle and opened the door to see nothing but The backside of his Brother?s Naked body Bulging huge with muscle from him jerking his monster cock over a porn magazine. Brennan?s cock started to get hard as he watched Wesley rub his teenage body.

?Aw Fuck Yeah Bitch, You Like these Muscles!?

Wes started bucking his body back and fourth making every muscle in his back swell up making him look like a true bodybuilder. He rubbed his gigantic legs flexing them making the muscle?s touch each other his balls almost being crushed between them.

?Shit Getting SO HUGE GRR, FUCKIN ANIMAL!! Yeah Come On Lick My Ass You Cunt!?

Wes squatted down rubbing his thick muscular ass, digging his fingers into his crack touching the newly developed coat of dark hair growing inside. Brennan?s cock was throbbing out of control watching as Wes started bucking faster and faster his giant testicles flopping back and forth ready to unload his hot man juice all over the floor

?AWW Fuck YEAH BITCH! DRINK IT ALL?

Brennan palmed his cock watching his brother grunt loudly cumming what looked like cups of his sperm all over the floor. Brennan gasped never seeing anyone cum so much in there life, watching him pump load after load for almost a full minute creating a giant puddle of his man juice around his feet. Brennan quickly adjusted his cock standing up slowly watching Wes wipe a wad of cum off his dick and rub it all over his nipples in total ecstasy of his own body. Wes suddenly turned around forcing Brennan to look upon his brother?s erection. His mouth dropped open seeing that it was immensely bigger than this morning, soaring above his belly button thick as a beer can and engorged in veins. His balls looked bigger then before and hung low against his cum covered thighs. Bren pushed the door a little more making it Squeak..

?oh shit..?

?Oh hey Bren! Just cleaning up my mess, I just blew My load everywhere dude! Not Only am I growing bigger but I?m Cumming way more haha! Oh and Hope you don?t mind but I barrowed one of your porn magazines, Its probably ruined now though. I fucking wasted that thing with my cum dude!?

?uh.. That?s ok I?ve seen it enough times anyway?

Wes bent over and pulled up his briefs trying to get them over his thick thighs hearing the threads snap and strain trying to get around the mammoth muscles. They were looking ridiculously huge now resembling a bodybuilders legs, except covered in manly hair. He finally yanked them up over his balls unable to hide his erection as the top of his cock was popping out of his stretched out waistband.. The black crotch hair was everywhere now sprouting out of the top and the sides looking fuller and thicker. Wes grabbed his cock and snickered watching his older brother stare at his giant man hood.

?You wanna cock Like this Brennan!? Actually that?s a dumb question cause What Guy wouldn?t wanna cock Like this, ITS HUGE!! I can barely fit my hand around it! Guess How big this thing is!?

?Wes I don?t wanna play this game?

?GUESS?

?Fine, I don?t know you said it was 9 inches this morning?

?Nope! Its BIGGER! I just measured it at 10 and half inches!! Which means.. My Cock is now Twice as big as Yours HAHA GRRRR!! Fuck Dude I love Being Big! How many times do you go to the gym anyway? I havn?t been to the gym in a while dude!

?Wait?You mean.. you havn?t been lifting??

?No Way dude! I havn?t hit the weights sense the end of boarding school and that was like in June. Uncle Jeff and I just threw parties and fucked girls all summer long haha! It was Awesome! Anyway next time you go to the gym I?m going with you. Cause I was thinking about hitting the weights big time and really Bulking Up! What Ya Think??

?bigger..??

?Yeah Dude! Oh and by the way the Coach?s scale must be off or something because I Just weighed myself And I?m 234 POUNDS OF ROCK SOLID MUSCLE GRR!!

?234 Pounds!!??

?Haha That?s Right Squirt! Your Little Bro weighs 24 Pounds more Than you do Haha So Much For you being My Big Bro, I outgrew you faster then I thought?

?No this can?t be happening.. He couldn?t have grown over 30 Pounds in one day..?

Brennan trembled thinking to himself watching Wes just stand there flexing his giant 17 inch biceps for his own amusement. He looked freakishly huge.. His shoulders and back were much wider then his own now and Even though Brennan didn?t want to admit it he had a feeling Wes was now taller than him.

?MM MAN All These Muscle?s, and All This Manly Hair!! GRR Shit Bro Can You imagine if I keep growing Like this.. You?ll be a fucking MIDGET Next to me in no time haha. And Mom And Dad are gonna go bankrupt trying to buy me clothes. I mean did you see the ones I bought yesterday! They Barely Fit Me bro.. I?m Tellin you isn?t just some little growth spurt? It?s a Fucking GROWTH EXPLOSION HAHA!! I wouldn?t be surprised if I woke up tomorrow and nothing fit me. MM Fuck that would be awesome, But to grow more I gotta eat, I?m fuckin starving.

Brennan watched Wes Leave the room in just his underwear hearing the thumps of his foot as he headed downstairs. He stood there with his tiny boner closing his door and heading to his bed, and began jerking over his new big brother?





Hey Guys Hope You likin it so far. Next Chapter is actually gonna be one of the news one's and I'll post it shortly.
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I loved these original stories, and this revision is even better! I can't wait for the next one!
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I don't know why but I always identify...

... with the eclipsed older brother. Just once I'd like to see a cocky younger brother surpass and lord it over his older bro, only to find his older bro turned out to be a late bloomer. Then the older bro catches up and then surpasses the cocky younger bro only to NOT act like a jerk. Just being the big bro again and putting the younger bro back in his rightful SECONDARY place being revenge enough.
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Well..

That gives me a story idea, how many guys would like to see a story where the Big Brother is obsessed with getting bigger and his younger brother supports and worships him?
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Why do stories always have to revolve around one guy dominating another??? What would be wrong with the older brother equaling the younger brothers size and they support each other in continuing to grow both becoming increasingly more awesome??? If you insist on having worship have them worship each other...

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Outcomes that are "Win-Win" in my opinion are nearly always better when you don't have a real villian in the story...
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Why do stories always have to revolve around one guy dominating another??? What would be wrong with the older brother equaling the younger brothers size and they support each other in continuing to grow both becoming increasingly more awesome??? If you insist on having worship have them worship each other...

Ender

Outcomes that are "Win-Win" in my opinion are nearly always better when you don't have a real villian in the story...
THE MIGHTY ENDER SPEAKES!!!!

We must do as told or feel his wrath!!!

lol kidding! ender love ya!
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I understand and appreciate constructive criticism but usually that means things you can improve about the story, not putting down the entire story line. It honestly makes makes me wonder why I still do this, cause I am taking up time to write story for you guys and then I get all these whiners. Thank you to all the guys that leave nice comments!
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I understand and appreciate constructive criticism but usually that means things you can improve about the story, not putting down the entire story line. It honestly makes makes me wonder why I still do this, cause I am taking up time to write story for you guys and then I get all these whiners. Thank you to all the guys that leave nice comments!
Can I leave a mostly-nice comment that still has a bit of whining? I like your new stories, but could you go back and finish some of your older, unfinished stories? I really liked "My Big Step-Dad", and you left us hanging with part 3.
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I like all your stories, but this one was my favourite series out of all the other stuff I've seen that you've written. I thought you finished it a while ago, so I'm glad to see you're going back over it and adding new stuff and maybe continuing it.

There are some things I would do differently if I were writing a story, but I'm not, which is the whole point. What you do works for you and obviously a lot of people like it, so just go with it and ignore people who would rather complain and ruin it for others. And if someone leaves helpful criticism, that's good, but you're still not obligated to change anything since it's your story.
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I don't normally comment on stories (because there are so many quite frankly and I don't think I can sincerely give appreciation for all of them) but it looks like you are getting a little bit of a 'beat-down' about this particular story and it may be undermining your motivation. If I may offer a sincere appreciation, I actually DO enjoy this story very much. The whole 'domination-vs-mutual-growth' debate should really be in its own thread, not attached to the storyline thread of an author who as you already noted, "constructive criticism usually that means things you can improve about the story, not putting down the entire story line". I wouldn't change the direction of this story one bit, and if I may offer one constructive comment, it would help me to enjoy and visualize the story better if there are some stats of the two brothers sprinkled in for comparative purposes. The only really measurement I recall was the arm but without some kind of scale, I don't know if that's on a 5'6" or 6'6" frame to know just how awesome it is! I hope you will keep this story up, I'm looking forward to chapter 3!
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It says in this chapter when the coach measures them that Brennan is 6"2 and Wesley is 6"1 but probably after his track growth his is taller then brennen cause it says at the end of the chapter Brennan think's Wes might be taller now.
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Thank you! I don't often post, but I just had to say that given a few of the posts on this series.

This is one of the hottest stories I've read in a while, and I'm so grateful for all of the work you (and the other authors on this site) put into your works. I really wish that the criticism would remain in the "polite constructive" category, but I recognize that some people will have complaints. I, for one, found this totally hot. Keep up the good work!

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I just wanted to say that this story is shaping up nicely, and after reading and enjoying college muscle, this is a nice change of pace, with the same twists that make it hot...keep up the good work bro
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I agree!!! this has been one of the hottest stories in a while@@@ Don't change a thing and let your be free with these stories. Trust me when i tell you your biggest critic is most likely you.


Thank you again for sharing your imagination and fantasys with us
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hey these stories are great, cant wait for part 3!
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I like this story btw
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I cant find part 1!!! where is it??
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Hands down soccerstud88 has some of the hottest stories!!!
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these stories can be true. it was for me. my "little" brother didn't grow hair or 30 lbs in a day, but in one year he went from a skinny guy to being able to press me overhead as if it was just a sack of feathers. he lorded it over me for years, always using his muscles to dominate me. maybe ill write about it sometime.
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where can I read Part 1???
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I know this is an old story and the discussion has been over for quite some time, but I don't think readers should criticize an entire storyline. If they dislike a type of story, they don't need to read it. "Lil bro dominates big bro" is a classic plot in muscle growth stories that has quite an audience, so there is no reason to complain about it being overused.

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where can I read Part 1???
http://www.musclegrowth.org/forum/sh...ad.php?t=12242
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