New Story: The Protege's Gift

[Ultrabeef]

[COLOR=silver]The Prot?g??s Gift[/COLOR]
[COLOR=silver]By Ultrabeef[/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]The doorbell rang again, this time impatiently. ?Shit? I muttered to myself thinking aloud ?I guess Bryan must be here already?. ?Just a minute? I yelled down the stairs to my soon to be guest. I actually had been kind of dreading this meeting with my former acting student Bryan Sanders ever since he called last week to tell me he was in town visiting his parents and he wanted to stop by to see me. [/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]Bryan Sanders had been my star drama student when I ran the local community youth theatre a few years back. The kid had a ton of talent and played all of the leading roles under my direction. After graduating high school a few years back he had moved out to L.A. to continue training as an actor and hopefully break into the Hollywood film industry. I knew he had talent but frankly I wasn?t too hopeful that he would become the next young Hollywood star. I hadn?t seen Bryan since he had moved across the country and was a little interested in how his pursuit of fame and fortune were going. [/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]I had been out of work for the past few years ever since the economy forced the community theatre to close. I had also put on a ton on extra weight. In short, I was a middle aged, unemployed, fat ass. The doorbell rang again. Taking one last look in the bathroom mirror and deciding that it was useless, I headed downstairs to the door. [/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]I expected to see the tall, gangly Bryan with his longish sandy brown hair and perfect gleaming smile. I wonder if Bryan ever filled out at all, I thought to myself. When I opened the door a total stranger greeted me. There on my porch stood a beautiful young man with longish sandy brown hair, bright green eyes, and a perfect gleaming smile. He was wearing a black track suit that hugged his beefy thighs. His warm-up jacket was unzipped and he was wearing no shirt underneath. The cleavage of his smooth rounded pecs and his tight 6 pack abs peeked tantalizingly from beneath the fabric. [/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]?Hey, Mr. Bart, long time no see? the cute stud said with a beautiful smile and grabbed me in a powerful bear hug. Taken aback by the sheer power of this young man?s arms wrapped around me, my mind raced. ?Bryan, is that you? I asked while trying to process the incredible transformation that had taken place in my prot?g?. Bryan had filled out all right, in all the right places. ?Shit yeah, Mr. Bart. It?s me. Uh, can I come in?? ?S? sure Bryan? I mumbled in distraction as the young muscle stud entered my house, his perfect firm ripe ass brushing against me as he did so. [/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]I locked the door and turned around to see Bryan staring at me with a huge boyish grin. ?Shit, he?s so fucking cute? I silently thought to myself as I gazed upon my former prot?g?. ?Wh?why don?t you sit down Bryan? I mumbled. Bryan plopped onto my brown leather sofa as I sat in the side chair next to it. ?So, you?re probably wondering how I got this body, aren?t you Mr. Bart?? Bryan asked. As he leaned forward on the sofa, preparing to tell his story I could make out his huge dick running down one leg of his tight black sweat pants. ?Um? hell yes? I replied. ?What did you do to yourself Bryan? Are you taking steroids?? I asked with concern, after all, I was something of a father figure to Bryan and he was still just a kid. ?Oh no man, nothing like that? Bryan innocently gushed, his long lashes flickering over his crystal blue eyes. [/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]?Ya see, when I got to L.A. there weren?t any jobs and I was running out of money. I was desperate? ?Why didn?t you call me?? I asked ?I would have helped you out?. ?I know you would have Mr. Bart, you?re the best? Bryan continued, ?but I needed to do this on my own?. As he spoke Bryan took off his open warm-up jacket revealing the chiseled torso that was only hinted at until now. ?You can call me Jayson. You?re not my student anymore.? I replied, my mouth starting to dry out at the sight of my once skinny prot?g??s perfect hairless pecs, large dark nipples, wide shoulders, and 6 pack abs. ?Well, I was looking for work and I met this dude who helps out young guys trying to break into the business like me, anyway, he hooked me up with some cutting edge shit he had that turned my body into the temple of physical perfection you see before you. Suddenly everything changed, I was getting calls every day from casting directors, agents, photographers, you name it. I starting doing print ads, commercials, soap opera gigs, and even a few pornos?. [/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]?Bryan, what the hell, I mean what does your mother think of all this? Drugs, porn, I just can?t believe you?d get involved in all this? I stammered as Bryan slowly stood up from the sofa and dropped his black tight sweat pant. He slowly bent over in front of me with his big perfect ass, hugged by his tight grey boxer briefs, and kicked off his pants. As he turned around his dick was swelling up causing his boxer briefs to tent out obscenely in front. ?you enjoying the show Mr. B.? Bryan purred in a deep sexy voice. ?Bryan? what the hell are you doing?? I managed to say in my firmest tone, while trying to remember to breathe. I was getting really aroused by this almost naked hunk in my living room. [/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]?Well, ya see Mr. Bart, I mean Jayson, I?ve been dreaming of coming to see you ever since I got this body to show you what a success I?ve become and thank you for all you did for me. You believed in me when I was just a dumb kid and no one else did.? Bryan?s eyes were welling up with tears and true emotion. ?I always thought you were the best, I mean you were so awesome to me. I love you Jayson Bart? the young stud blurted out. ?Whh ? what are you talking about Bryan?? I mumbled, my own swollen dick pressing against the fly of my jeans. ?Oh, I think you know what I mean? Bryan smiled his perfect smile regaining his composure and pulled down his grey boxer briefs over his thick, beefy thighs. His fat, thick dick flopped out against his leg dripping with pre-cum from amidst the dark sweaty bush of public hair where it began. ?Oh fuck? I exhaled in a breathless tone as Bryan advanced toward me, his dick now at full attention. Captivated by the beautiful young man before me I dropped to my knees and placed Bryan?s big sweaty cock in my mouth. ?Oh fuck yeah? Bryan groaned, ?I?ve dreamed of this moment for years, Mr. B.? [/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]After finishing the blow job on my former prot?g?, I was both shocked and repulsed by my own actions. As Bryan cleaned up in the bathroom I came out of my lustful trance and was consumed with regret. Bryan had been like a son to me, he trusted me, what had I just done. Bryan, still naked, stood across the room and looked at me with his tantalizing big blue eyes, and a mysterious smile crossed his face. ?It?s time for the next part of your present Jayson? he smiled and pulled a syringe from his duffel bag and pulled off the cap. He crossed the room to where I stood and pressed his hard erect nipples against my t-shirt that did little to conceal my flabby chest. ?It?s time for you to be my muscle daddy, Mr. B.? he purred, his hot sweet breath against my cheek. With one forceful move, before I could speak, he jabbed the syringe into my leg and emptied its contents. [/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]?Whh ? what the fuck, Bryan? I managed to stammer before my mind clouded over and an immense pressure filled my body. It felt as if a powerful air hose had been stuck inside my body, I could feel myself expanding in all directions. I could sense my body was getting heavier, wider, and fuller by the minute. I feeling was so intense, both painful and yet pleasurable. Every muscle fiber in my body felt so alive and tingled with growing power. ?I just gave you a full dose of the bodybuilder serum? he grinned boyishly, I just can?t wait to see what my mentor looks like with a shitload of muscle on him. [/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]?Uhhhh ?. fuck? looking down at my chest that had been soft and flabby only a minute ago, now swelling with big thick slabs of muscle. I reached across my ballooning pecs, brushing my big orgasm inducing nipple as I did so and felt my larger engorged cock dance with pleasure. My big wide hand and meaty vein-covered forearm grabbed the neck of my t-shirt and ripped it off of my expanding body allowing my hot, sweaty flesh to come in contact with the cool air of the living room. Now freed from their cotton prison, my hairy pecs went into overdrive as each muscle swelled even larger, squaring off and forcing my big nipples toward the floor. I could feel my shoulders continued to widen and my delts push upward toward my insanely thick neck. Looking down again I flexed my massive bicep and watched the thick, freaky muscle jump as veins snaked across the still growing arm. I reached down with my other hand and grabbed the waistband of my jeans and ripped them from my body. As I did so, I could feel my swollen quads feel the freedom I had give them. My massive cock and my ever growing glutes waged a tug-of-war until together, each swelling in a different direction, they ripped through the flimsy fabric of my underwear[/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]I could feel that the transformation was now complete as I turned to my young prot?g? who was jacking off like crazy on my sofa while watching me grow. ?Is this what you wanted Bryan?? I purred in a deep, sexy voice as I looked in the full length mirror across the room. It was obvious that Bryan was in awe of the total freakish stud I had grown into. He crossed the room, and tentatively came up behind me, his big dick fully erect . He placed his warm hand on my bulbous chest and began to massage my pec. ?Oh, fuck yeah Jayson? he whispered into my ear as he licked it. I could feel his stiff cock brushing against my ass. ?Why don?t you show your muscle daddy just how much you love him?? I growled. Jayson immediately went down on my dick and pleasured me. For the next 6 hours we fucked in every possible room of my house and in every possible position. ?I fucking love you? Jayson whispered into my ear as he lay, exhausted, across my massive hairy chest. ?I love you too Bryan? I whispered back as we both dozed off to sleep.[/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]The next morning as Bryan still lay asleep in my bed I noticed another syringe sticking out of his duffel bag. I was labeled ?bodybuilder? just like the one that he had injected me with. An evil smirk crossed my face as I had an idea. I crossed to the bedroom and climbed onto the bed. Bryan?s beautiful chest rose and fell with his breath. He was so beautiful, so perfect, and yet so small compared to the beast I had become. I leaned over and kissed him on the lips. He woke and smiled at me. ?Fuck, Jayson? last night was just incredible, better than I could have ever dreamed?. ?I know? I cockily replied. ?You know Bryan, I really can?t have a little twink like you as my prot?g?, I mean what would people think?. ?Whh ? what do you mean?? Bryan groggily asked. ?I mean, Bryan, it?s time for you to look like my prot?g?? I smiled and jabbed the syringe into his arm, emptying it. [/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]A look of panic crossed Bryan?s face. ?What the fuck did you just do?? he screamed. ?I think you know? I replied with a grin. ?Oh shit? Bryan muttered, distracted. The serum was taking effect. I could see Bryan?s eyes glaze over as his body began to swell with new growth. It was so fucking hot, making my hunky prot?g? into an even bigger stud. I couldn?t help but jack off as his t-shirt became skin tight, filling with massive pecs. Thick brown hair started sprouting on his once hairless chest and abs. His arms swelled bigger and bigger with thick, heavy muscle. Veins covered his beefy forearms and his once perfect six pack now swelled into a distended roid gut. His cute magazine-model ass expanded into a freaky bubble butt and pushed his body up away from the bed. His shoulders were so wide, his thighs so powerful, and his dick, magnificent. As the growth stopped Bryan lumbered out of bed and his beefy quads rubbing against each other as he walked toward me, tears in his eyes, dark brown stubble across his once smooth jaw.[/COLOR]


[COLOR=silver]?Why the fuck did you do that Jayson?? he Bryan sobbed. What am I going to do, now?? Bryan moaned ?I can never be on a soap opera or in commercial now.? ?Calm down Bryan? I smiled. ? I?m just a big meat head, a freak? he whined. Just then he caught sight of himself in the mirror. ?Oh, fuck. Is that really me?? He lumbered to the mirror and gazed at the massive muscle freak he had become. ?Oh fuck ? oh fuck ? oh fuck? he murmured as he flexed in the mirror, in awe of his big new body. ?I?m so fucking big, so hairy, oh Jesus?? Bryan murmured. I came up behind him and massaged his wide shoulders with by big hands as my thick dick rubbed against his massive hairy ass. ?How about you be my porn star prot?g? boyfriend? I cooed into his ear. ?Oh, fuck yeah? he moaned, ?I like the sound of that, who needs Hollywood anyway??[/COLOR]

[a_lost_prophet]

Well written, short and sweet. Great story. Look forward to reading more of your stuff.

[philat99]

Very enjoyable!
Mike

[Mad Dog]

I like the idea, but I found it hard to read because it wasn't following a basic rule of grammar for writing: Every time a different person is talking, they get their own paragraph break. Having two people talking back and forth in the same paragraph makes it difficult to follow the conversation.

[blondYT]

Originally Posted by Mad Dog

I like the idea, but I found it hard to read because it wasn't following a basic rule of grammar for writing: Every time a different person is talking, they get their own paragraph break. Having two people talking back and forth in the same paragraph makes it difficult to follow the conversation.

@ mad dog: grammar is about the relationships of words to each other in a sentence: such as subject, verb, direct object, modifier, dependent clause, etc.

what you've said about the structure of paragraphs is not grammar but formatting. since the story always has the speaker identified after the quote, it wasn't hard for me to read at all.

[blondYT]

very nice story. got me hard. it would have been nice to see a little more about the past between teacher and student. did the teacher have a crush on him before? did the student have a crush on the teacher before? what were their interactions in the past?

also, you have a tendency to take the longer way to say things sometimes. for instance, you wrote: [COLOR="Red"]I wonder if Bryan ever filled out at all, I thought to myself." [/COLOR]. You could have just said, "I wondered if Bryan ever filled out at all."

One of my favorite writers (though she's not on this site!) once said she tries to eliminate all tags, such as: he thought, she muttered, he yelled. She says the dialogue should speak for itself. I think your writing would be even clearer without the tags.

It certainly couldn't be any hotter! Well done. Just some constructive feedback.

[Mad Dog]

Originally Posted by blondYT

what you've said about the structure of paragraphs is not grammar but formatting.

I stand corrected!