The Southern Werewolf II

[SouthernSuitor]

I'm considering publishing this series, so I'm afraid I have to remove it. Sorry!

[Mad Dog]

Awesome! A worthy follow-up to the last chapter, I'm hooked for more!

[SouthernSuitor]

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Londonboy]

I am so ready for more. And the best part is that I can re-read this part over and over because you've got so many unbelievable details - that are hitting all of the right buttons (no pun intended).

[leedsmusic]

if i didn't know any better I'd say you were a werewolf based on the amount of details.

[therealm1]

Thanks so much for continuing this story. I'm incredibly turned on by Walt but especially his Alpha friend, Ralph ;-).

[raven79]

SouthernSuitor, this isn't a story its a screenplay for a really great erotic film. I'm dead serious, you literally made me want to be in that world with these awesome men. The descriptions of every single scene made me want to be there. You are an extremely talented writer. (Oh and I would love to be a muscular werewolf too! )

[martinp13]

I did so well... I had the end of the chapter in sight... then the Walt/Ralph reveal and I lost it. Thank you.

[SouthernSuitor]

Originally Posted by Londonboy

I am so ready for more. And the best part is that I can re-read this part over and over because you've got so many unbelievable details - that are hitting all of the right buttons (no pun intended).

I'm most pleased, sir!

Originally Posted by leedsmusic

if i didn't know any better I'd say you were a werewolf based on the amount of details.

Awwooooooooo!

Originally Posted by therealm1

Thanks so much for continuing this story. I'm incredibly turned on by Walt but especially his Alpha friend, Ralph ;-).

I'm glad you enjoyed it! You'll be seeing plenty more of Ralph in the next chapter.

Originally Posted by raven79

SouthernSuitor, this isn't a story its a screenplay for a really great erotic film. I'm dead serious, you literally made me want to be in that world with these awesome men. The descriptions of every single scene made me want to be there. You are an extremely talented writer. (Oh and I would love to be a muscular werewolf too! )

Thank you so much! They say that a good writer lets the reader visualize the tale for themselves, but one of my chief weaknesses is that I often get carried away in visualizing the details for the reader instead. It is my goal, at least, to reward the reader who's patient enough to get through it all.

I suspect we've got a whole pack of werewolves on this board!

Originally Posted by martinp13

I did so well... I had the end of the chapter in sight... then the Walt/Ralph reveal and I lost it. Thank you.

You're welcome.

[Mdlftr]

“You didn’t see me—looking—um—looking different, or anything, did you?” Walt couldn’t let it slip, not now. He couldn’t just blurt out to his coworker that he was a werewolf. That sort of thing didn’t build employee teamwork relationships terribly well


Bwahahaha! I LOVE your writing! Funny, with AMAZING detail, increasing suspense as we see first Walt and Raphael then Cobb and Clinton in simultaneous scenes. No wonder they call sexual orgasm "the little death"!

Excellent Halloween Treat!

Awoooo!


Mdlftr

[SouthernSuitor]

It seems as though I've caused le petit mort in at least one of our viewers. I hope that doesn't mean I get the death penalty.

Your praise is lavish as always. Thank you so much! Happy Halloween!

Awooooo!

[philat99]

Thanks for the great Halloween treat!!! Clint could be a great metaphor for the fundamentalist religious right! Such twists and turns and great description make for quite a memorable story line and, for sure, a great yearning for MORE!!!

[SouthernSuitor]

Originally Posted by philat99

Thanks for the great Halloween treat!!! Clint could be a great metaphor for the fundamentalist religious right! Such twists and turns and great description make for quite a memorable story line and, for sure, a great yearning for MORE!!!

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Clint's insanity is fueled in part by religious fanaticism. But I'm inclined to say that such fanaticism is the symptom instead of the disease.