My Not-So-Little Brother

[sergel02]

Originally Posted by Logan2009

god i wish this story continued

I'm working on it lol

[n00blet]

How's that next part coming along?

[sergel02]

“T-Tory?”

My brother just looked at his older, adopted brother with a sexy half-smile and tossed me onto our bed.

“I really, really want you to become the manager for our team, so I was prepared to, persuade you.”

“Eh?” I didn’t know if I should find Tory in the hot or scary territory.

He unraveled the strap on his coat and tossed it onto the ground. Before I could get a decent look at his black and red graphic tee, he ripped it off and tossed it on top of his trench coat. Without any hesitation, he went to unbuckle is belt and take his jeans off, and slowly his underwear after that. He didn’t even give it a second thought. I could feel my jaw dropping at looking at Tory’s naked, even buffer bod, bigger than before. The light from the window really showed him off as the god he looked like.

Hot territory it is.

There was no doubt in my mind that if you took all the 15 year olds in the world, none of them would be bigger, more ripped, or as impressive. It’s probably been a few months since I saw him half naked like this before. He had a full on eight-pack, even when he was just breathing you could see it. His entire midsection was criss-crossed every which way with muscles upon muscles heading in every direction to form a trunk that looked like a work of art. The abs, the obliques, the serratus anterior, that Adonis belt (god that belt). Tory had it all. This kid had the abs people twice his age would die for.

My eyes and jaw kept going downwards. This was the first time I’ve saw Tory’s legs since he got bigger, and they looked like they could kick a monster truck over. I’m wondering how he even got those tight jeans over the enormous quads he had. A slight flex, and I could see every head in the muscle. His calves matched his upper leg, and I could see the mass even though Tory was facing me, flat-footed too. It’s like some muscle monster just came and encompassed his lower body.

My eyes began to fixate on the star of the show, his package. “No, no, no,” I told myself. It’s not right to look at someone else’s private area. But my virginal nature couldn’t help me take my eyes off of my little brother’s not-so-little dick. The symbol that has defined men since forever. I typically found them…so repulsive, even my own. Let’s be real here dudes, our dicks aren’t exactly things that should be shown in museums (unless it’s a museum of sex, I guess). But at Tory’s, I wasn’t grossed out or disgusted. I was in awe at its length and girth; I was amazed. I was turned on. It was just there, all relaxed, and like every other part of Tory, massive. It looked good, it looked big. It looked powerful, unlike anything I’ve seen before. Nothing has made me feel this way. This feeling, what exactly is it?

He must have seen me eying him, since he flirtatiously told me “eyes a little higher, Jay.”
All while smiling that killer smile. He ran his slender finger up the middle groove of his ripped belly. You could probably keep change in that groove. His abs themselves weren’t anything to sneeze at. They weren’t just decoration, they were hard muscles. Each muscle was probably bigger than the biceps on the average guy.

His finger crept up even further till Tory lodged it into his pecs. His huge, hard, could-probably-smash-bricks-against-it pecs. He gave one flex of his gorgeous chest and his finger looked swallowed up. I could see the serrations in his chest, almost like they were emanating his power. It wasn’t just his chest; his delts have grown too. The shape is that of a cannonball, with the muscle looking like it complete envelops his shoulders and not just sit on top of it, like a lot of people.

“Hold on, the best is still to come.” Tory grinned as he jumped onto the bed. He feverishly took my shirt off…and then my pants, and even my underwear after that. I haven’t been completely naked in front of Tory in years I think. Don’t think I have for anyone since I was a kid and my parents washed me.

He planted his massive tree-trunk arms, which must have been 17 inches flexed, on the sides of my head, his thumbs able to graze my ears. He began to lean down into me, his legs straddling mine, his dick crossing mine. I could feel my sweat forming and my blood rushing. He lowered his body even more, his forearms engorging with strength and blood. His rock-hard abs contacted my flat belly, and then his chest. Oh wow his chest. It was wider than my entire body I think. His pecs pressed into my nipples (that’s all that really was there) and his arms came down around me.

“Persuaded yet?” I just gulped, not able to say anything. “No?” he asked in a cute, sarcastic tone.

Tory started to kiss my neck, and I held my breath again. Then he whipped his tongue out, and licked my neck up and down. I think I lost consciousness for a bit there.

Tory propped himself on his arms, looked at me with those beautiful, green eyes, smiled, and said, “I guess I just have to try harder then.”

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Oh wow can't believe it's been 8 months since the last chapter
Sorry for not updating. In January it was a year that I started this story. Life just gets busy of course. Hopefully now in the summer I will have a little bit more time.
And any sort of feedback would be welcome.

[arpeejay]

Many thanks! Definitely worth the wait! (But don't make us wait that long for the next one!)

xoxo

Richard

[pizzadaddy]

This is a very nice story, love the growth and characters... The big BUT deals with the ages... Can you please make them 18+ its starting to bug me a lot... And I know they are not blood related, but a highschool incest thing is too weird to wrap my mind on

[Otaru_grower]

I'm of the opinion that with alpha guys, when you have teens who reach an adult size, they are ready for adult fun. It's just that simple.

This story is amazingly well written. I love it. Thank you so much for continuing it. I love love love how tender this last scene is. I am picturing it happen to me! That's how good it is.

[sergel02]

Originally Posted by pizzadaddy

This is a very nice story, love the growth and characters... The big BUT deals with the ages... Can you please make them 18+ its starting to bug me a lot... And I know they are not blood related, but a highschool incest thing is too weird to wrap my mind on

hehe I was actually thinking this myself when writing. I just need a way to make that transition smoothly. But I'm a writer, I gots some ideas.

[pizzadaddy]

Thanks man, i know Tory looks like a 20 something linebacker at 15... And behaves like a 20 something, which mitigates his actual age... So hes either going to chill with his puberty or be MASSIVE by when hes older... Either way, please after so many chapters of such a good story theres an urgency to it... He is still a boy this is geting fucked up, seriously... Sorry for the bluntness but this extended for so long already, im done with their childhood already... Which has incest btw... Something ill never understand but got to tolerate here for the sake of the story

[funboy]

Just keep this story going. It's fucking awesome (and I rarely use words like "fucking" in a post). Please Sir, may we have more? ��

[alexdrake]

I can only agree with everyone else. Fantastic story, please find the time to continue!

And whatever themes you want to explore, just do it. Of course everybody should have an opinion about the story, the age of the characters or the looming incest, and should also voice that opinion, but the important thing should be: if you want to write it, just write it.

I for one am looking forward to everything as brilliantly written as the stories you've shared with us so far.

[lsosuke]

You Write good but When you cut the part of sex , it s terrible because you dona finish the story please, the sex can be romantic dont cut it