That Perfect Moment

[Mass Driver]

Not my first rodeo, but I'd still like some feedback on how you guys want this to go.

The theme will still be...

That Perfect Moment
by dymondbolt

Remember that day it happened for you? When your life took a turn?
Surely you've had one. A perfect moment when your realized you were more than before.

It's called an epiphany for a reason. Some people use the word gestalt to describe it.
The total is greater than the sum of it's parts. Men can get like that. Not knowing what they really are until they get another viewpoint. Until that day, your body fools you into thinking nothing has changed.

My day came when I finally noticed the strange looks on guys faces when I was lifting in the gym. I don't know how I got so lost in the idea of "someday", and forgot it could suddenly become "Today". I do have an example of the before mentality.

Before my wake up day I was like that Brahma bull on my cousins farm. I was at a family reunion in Oklahoma and my cousin Don was seeing to a neighbors property while the family was away. He had to check the pressure at a Natural Gas well head and he asked If I wanted to go along. Halfway across his property and we came upon two bulls with their horns locked. I didn't see anything strange until I noticed that the smaller black longhorn bull was pushing the much larger brahma bull backwards. The bigger bull just kept backing up and backing up. He didn't give up but he wasn't winning.

I asked Don, "What's wrong with this picture?"

He chuckled and said, "The brahma is young yet. He doesn't know he's bigger than the longhorn."

Like the brahma bull, I had grown into my size. It took science and a lot of help from friends in the genetic engineering field. And like the bull I had lost track of just how big I had become. But all those wide eyes on the guys faces finally got me to look in the mirrors.

Then I smiled and took off my sweat shirt. At least three guys actually gasped. I had been tugging on my right nipple for at least two months now and had ignored the fact than my pecs were so thick that the nipple was pointing down off my chest. Wow.

I had to stop myself from rubbing my nipple cause it was causing another part of me to get pumped. I noticed that due to the direction two guys eyes were pointing towards my nether region. I was big there too. That was not something that I had been ignoring all these months. Maybe that was what had been distracting me from the rest of my body.......

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I know, it's just a tease, but it lets me get the right kind of feedback.
So let me know, OK?
Then the chapters will get longer.
And thicker...
AND STRONGER.........

MD

[Rarity]

I see nothing wrong, go on with le story, sir.

[Lionor_King]

Yes yes pleas please m ore more more!

[iceman75]

Yeah, I'm looking forward to more as well. Can't wait to see how big and strong the character turns out to be.

[Freaker!!]

It happened to me too. When I started going to gym I was 18 and from the age of 10 I wanted to win the Mr. Olympia title. But I never ever actually thought I could. My biceps were too short and my Calves and Tear Drops just didn't impress. That was until I wasn't so much talent scouted, as talent shouted by someone who knew exactly what would fulfil my dreams. The funny thing was, ust like you, the cocktale of oral suppliments, all very mysterios to me but raspberry flavoured and the once a month injections had me so horned up, not for sex, that practically came to dead stop, but horned up for workouts. 5 minutes before arriving at gym my heart would start pounding in anticipation and as soon as I arrived it was like I had tunnel vision. Only the workout mattered. I was so distracted I didn't notice the changes that were taking place. My mind was always thinking about the reps. If I wasn't actually working out I was daydreaming about doing reps extremely slowly. I'd get quite a pump just imaging my muscles contracting.

[bulkinupbig]

Mass Driver,
Very good start with a good premise/theme that can be expanded upon (pun intended).

Considering this is a work of fiction, the concept of a "realization transformation" is one that those of us who have applied ourselves in the gym and focused on our training and diet can find very relative.

Only request would be to incorporate in your story development the protagonist putting forth the effort... detail the dedication in the gym, the blood, sweat and tears and continued commitment needed to grow...

It will make the epiphany that much sweeter when it is realized.
Cheers,
bulkinupbig