Good Ol' Beasts 1.4

[Hirsuited]

I'm leaving the forum and deleting these stories (again) for the following reasons:

1.) The same creepy people are trying to stalk me again.
2.) I'm tired of seeing stories involving teenagers. They strike me as creepy--way too close to the pedophilic line for my comfort. I don't want my writing associated with a site that allows such stories.
3.) The handful of stories that don't involve teenagers consist only of muscles and sex. No sensuality. No suspense. No buildup.
4.) The few MG writers that I like tend not to post anymore.
5.) The time I spent writing these stories could have been spent going to the gym, as I've found.

That said, here are the things that will give me good memories of this site as I go:

1.) Some really kind, witty, intelligent, and genuine people, who've helped me become a better writer. You know who you are. I wish you all the best.
2.) This site helped inspire me to go to the gym. I've been going for over 6 months now. I'm not muscular yet--that's a long ways off--but I'm at least slim and toned. And, most importantly, I feel better about myself now that I'm going. The muscles will come later.
3.) This site is taught me that I'm not alone in any of my fetishes. You'd be surprised how reassuring that is.

With that, I'm bowing out. I hope this site continues to inspire others. Don't dwell in fantasies: go to the gym. Make your muscle growth real.

[muscl4life]

Wow! That was pretty intense, and had the perfect timing too, starting as every other chapter but taking the action mixed with sex and thriller (great combo )

I am curious to see how the new Walt will look and how will it change his behavior, I hope he gets to be braver stand up for himself and do the things he wants and not just what seems right for the family.

And of course, I wish he gets even bigger than his dad hehe

Cheers!

[GTlifter]

Wow when I was reading it you set it up great and just the wording you use and the situation and just wow.

[Londonboy]

It just gets better and better!!

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[convolution]

Wow,
thanks for that

[Mdlftr]

"Walt's mind felt like it was shrinking, trapped in a body too big for it--losing the battle to keep control--eroding--his thoughts just dissolving in all that blood and adrenaline and terror--becoming an incessant growl that rolled through his mind nonstop--like something within him was trying to scare him out of himself--some terrible, pitiless thing that wanted him out--wanted him gone--wanted him never to come back into his own head."

Great writing! Again, all the sensory information, that would be available to a werewolf, plus the human consciousness, are so well described!

Great job, Hirsuited!

Mdlftr

[Darmani]

I don't know what it is but usually not big in slow trod "generational" stories. But this is very nice. I like the imagery used for Beau, the father.. not the perspective character but I guess that's the point. Even the fine clothes.

Generaly enjoying the situations and the character and the set up even where you can guess stuff things move fast enough I don't feel the need to say "get on with it"

Actually liking this much better than the previous look at it. I don't know what it is but it just seems the writing is so much improved along with the feeling.