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| Its just a game: Prologue (Removed due to the fact it was horrible) Last edited by anglekindle; February 16th, 2009 at 07:45 PM. Reason: Bad Story     |
| July 17th, 2008, 09:27 PM | |||
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| im def liking where this is going |
| July 17th, 2008, 09:29 PM | |||
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| July 17th, 2008, 10:30 PM | |||
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| Good start. Don't let the numbers get to you. By the time you have the third or fourth chapter out, you'lll be getting a lot of comments. I bet mostly good. Keep Writing. redroger11 |
| July 17th, 2008, 10:41 PM | |||
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| Yep, good start, and I *detest* "reality" game shows! :-) xoxo Richard |
| July 17th, 2008, 11:04 PM | |||
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| Great start! Good luck with your story! I'm looking forward to read more of it... weird, I sometimes feel my life is a TV show... Postcript I know what do you mean by the feeling of posting a story for the first time, but don't worry you'll be alright __________________ Vendr? un tiempo en el que no sabremos que nombre dar a lo que nos une. Su nombre se ir? borrando lentamente de nuestra memoria. Y luego, desaparecer? por completo. A time will come. When we'll no longer know how to call the thing that bind us. By slow degrees the word will fade from our memory. Then, it will dissapear altogether. El Cielo Dividido Broken Sky http://www.elcielodividido.com/ |
| July 17th, 2008, 11:37 PM | |||
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| Interesting. I wonder if his greatest wish can turn into his greatest fear and viceversa  Definetly need more of this  __________________ The Internet is for PORN! -Trekkie- http://chocomus.deviantart.com/ http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/user/chocomus/ |
| July 18th, 2008, 01:42 AM | |||
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| maybe he'll get what he wants, and lose everything else? From what's written, there's no real record of memory of what he was doing before he woke up... Other than Taco bell... Still, i'm quite curious as to how this will play out! |
| July 18th, 2008, 07:58 AM | |||
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Incidentally enough, I had Taco Bell while I was writing this(yum). Glad to see how well the prologue went down. Part 1 is underway. More info will be revealed then, instead of leaking information(like above) where you find out his name is Kevin halfway down the page... |
| July 18th, 2008, 02:19 PM | |||
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| This is very promising. I'm sure the story will be interesting. It seems like the writing is coming to you quite clearly. I was able to see everything in my mind with no trouble. No dark spots anywhere, for now. Don't worry about feedback too much. It will come. I'm crawling from the dark corner I was sitting (lurker) and I'm beginning to take an active role in the forum. So, you can count on my feedback for the other parts, as you put them |
| July 18th, 2008, 06:18 PM | |||
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| Good start There's definately nothing like it on the forums right now. I always enjoy reading something fresh. Please keep it going. |
| July 19th, 2008, 01:56 AM | |||
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| A little wait Got the dialogue down as well as more details, all thats left is to write it in a fluid-like-state. As much as I would like to have part 1 up by saturday night, a co-worker of mine is celebrating her birthday, so at latest the next part will be up Sunday evening.  |
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