Two Brothers: No They Don't

[arpeejay]

By Richard Jasper

Previous: http://www.musclegrowth.org/forum/sh...ad.php?t=17095

* * *

Will and Chris stood toe to toe, 600 lbs. of fur covered muscle.

Chris backed up a step and sighed.

"I wish you weren't my brother," he said, looking down.

Will's jaw dropped.

"Why on Earth would you say that?" Will said, his voice crackling with emotion.

Chris looked up and looked Will in the eye.

"Because I'm in love with you," Chris said. "I'm in love with you and you're my brother, goddammit."

Will slumped. It was if the air had been let out of a balloon.

"I love you, too, bro, you know that," Will said.

Chris nodded.

"I know that, but that's not what I said. I said I'm in love with you, not just that I love you."

Will grimaced. Seeing the expression on his big brother's face made Chris turn.

"No wait," Will said. "It's not that."

Chris looked over his shoulder, his eyes brimming with tears.

"I love you, Chris," Will said. "And you are soooo fucking hot. You are hands down the hottest man I have ever seen."

Chris wiped his eyes, and chuckled.

"Well, thanks," he said. "That's mighty sweet of you."

Will pulled Chris close and hugged him.

"And if you were not my brother, I'd be fucking your ass soooo hard right now," he said.

Chris was hard as a rock and from the feel of it so was Will.

"But you ARE my brother," Will said. "You'll always BE my brother. And I'll always love you AS my brother."

Chris nodded. He knew what was coming.

"But I can't be in love with you," Will said. "We could never be partners the way partners are supposed to be partners. You'd always be my little brother, I'd always be your big brother."

Chris hugged Will -- and then let him go.

"I know," Chris said. "That's why I said what I said."

Will pondered that for a moment, then broke into a big grin.

"Want to work out with me?"

Chris' smile was a mile wide.

"You ready to get your ass kicked?"

* * *

Will went back to Stanford and joined the football team as a walk on, the biggest, strongest, fastest, and most powerful man to ever play for Stanford.

By the time he graduated three years later, he was up to 400 lbs. of solid muscle and a leading NFL draft pick -- which he turned down.

"Sorry, fellas," he told the recruiters. "I'm going to medical school."

Penn, to be precise, in Philadelphia, which was Randy's hometown. Will had met Randy not long after returning to Palo Alto, a fellow freshman and competitive swimmer. At 6'4, Randy had a couple of inches in height on Will. Despite his broad shoulders and narrow hips, Randy looked like a twig next to Will -- and that was just the way both of 'em liked it.

As for Chris...

By the time his birthday rolled around at the end of his freshman year of high school Chris was up to 6'2 and 350 lbs. of solid muscle, which put him about 10 lbs. ahead of Will.

Over the next three years, he continued to grow -- a lot!

By the time Chris finished high school, he was 6'6" tall and 500 lbs. of solid muscle, the biggest (by far!) high school athlete anyone had every seen. He was recruited by everyone, of course, but in the end, there was only one choice.

"It's Stanford, for me," Chris told the reporters who flocked to the Harper home to hear his decision.

"Just like my brother."

In their condo on Walnut Street, Will and Randy watched the announcement on ESPN.

"Jesus," Randy said. "That kid has gotten so frickin' huge."

Will grunted and adjusted himself.

"Just like his brother," Randy added.

Will flipped Randy over and began attacking Randy's beautiful bubble butt.

This one's for you, Chris, he thought. This one's for you!

[The end]

[GTlifter]

I like it man, very nice I have a feeling of not complete but love how Will ends the story getting him some tail.

[Mad Dog]

With all these superhuge guys running around, I wonder if they ever run into each other... :3

Anyways, cool story. I think I prefer this ending, but I like the choice you gave us. Here's looking forward to more~

[chocomus]

It's a nice ending

[touchmejudgeme]

Honey, I've been reading your work for a long time and I can tell your heart and soul didn't go into this ending like it does your others, so why did you write it?

[arpeejay]

Originally Posted by touchmejudgeme

Honey, I've been reading your work for a long time and I can tell your heart and soul didn't go into this ending like it does your others, so why did you write it?

Mostly to see if I could.

I basically wrote myself into a box. Either they were or were not going to do it, after which everything else was a moot point. Same thing with the other ending, if you think about it; the action was the consummation, the follow up was tepid by comparison. Here the action was tepid to begin with and the ending just sort of puttered out.

I guess the answer is:

I don't know how to do unrequited love (although god knows I have plenty of personal experience in that regard!)

xoxo

Richard

[arpeejay]

Originally Posted by touchmejudgeme

Honey, I've been reading your work for a long time and I can tell your heart and soul didn't go into this ending like it does your others, so why did you write it?

Also (as I said with the other one):

Sorry it wasn't too your liking.

I'll be delighted to read any ending that someone else comes up with! If anyone wants to try their hand at it, please feel free!

xoxo

Richard

[Mad Dog]

Well, just letting you know I appreciated it. :3

[arpeejay]

Originally Posted by Mad Dog

Well, just letting you know I appreciated it. :3

Thanks, Mad Dog!

Sorry to all of you if I sounded like I was offended -- I wasn't! Sometimes they work better than other times. I really feel like you own the characters as much as I do; if you, or anyone else, wants to do something else with them, I'm happy to have you do so!

xoxo

Richard