The underground fight club - part I - entering the dungeon

[curinga]

Hey guys! First of all, thanks for the feedback! I`ll try to post the new chapters as soon as possible!

As some of you already know, English is not my first language, so sorry if sometimes it sounds a little poor written or if i make any big mistake... I hope I can share my stories with you guys without any communication noise!

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The underground fight club - teaser

Entering the dungeon

The security monster came back. Only now that he was not pressing the air out of my lungs I could really see how monstrously huge that guy was!! He was standing right in front of me. His enormous hairy chest muscles covered all of my field of vision under the remains of his shirt and suit, going up and down with each breath the beast took. He looked down at me and asked something, but, again, his words did not mean anything. He kept looking down, staring deep into my eyes for endless seconds waiting for an answer and his look wasn't friendly at all! I tried to say something but my mouth just hanged open while I gagged some vowels. My shaking legs made clear how desperate I was when my friend said something my brain did not process due to the beast in front of me. The monster took his radio again, but this time he did not walk away, he just turned to his left and then there I was, facing the hugest arm which not even in my wildest dreams I could ever have imagined! He kept squeezing the overgrown bicep just a couple of inches away from my nose. His arm muscles fought for space against the huge pectorals and shoulders while he struggled to get the radio near to his ear. The mountainous muscles were so close to my face that I saw the fibers in the fabric giving up the fight one by one as the powerful muscles kept stretching them more and more. I even heard a louder noise of ripping clothes as he took a deeper breath... and then I felt the deep voice shaking my insides again and calling me back to reality: "YOUR GOOD TO GO. PROCEED TO THE NEWCOMERS AREA" he said looking at me and pointing at a small steel door behind me. "YOU KNOW WHAT TO DO" the beast said to my friend and then looked back at me as if saying "why are you still there?" without a drop of patience in his expression. I looked at my friend and he just mimed with his mouth "Go! I'll meet you inside" I just thought "Shit! Will I be left alone with that monster?!?!"

It took a couple of seconds for my legs to respond the signal from my brain and start walking. I entered the door praying for the muscle beast not to follow me, but after a while, when I could think clearly again, I noticed that he wouldn't be able to go through that small door without taking half wall along with him...

The heavy steel door closed behind me. I looked back and noticed there was no knob on the door, neither any other visible way to open it from inside. I was now in a narrow and dark corridor, almost pissing on my pants with shaking legs and no way back. After calming down a little I took a step forward and some lights went on. I saw an arrow painted on the floor and after taking some deep breaths I started walking on the pointed direction. Soon there was a larger corridor crossing the one I was walking on and another arrow painted on the floor pointing to the right. With legs still shaking a bit I thought I would faint when I heard a voice coming from the direction the arrow was pointing to. It was so deep and strong that it sounded like a beast roar even though it sounded like the owner of the voice was just talking calmly to someone. I tiptoed to the corner of the wall to see what was waiting for me if I followed the arrow on the floor. When I looked at the end of the corridor I thought my eyes would jump from my head! At first I thought it was the same guy that squeezed the air out of me just moments before, but soon I realized it wasn't.. You ask why? Just because this one was BIGGER!!And I mean WAAAY BIGGER!!

The monster was a good 10 feet away from me. He wore the same kind of security man uniform the guy outside wore, but this one's clothes were way more destroyed by the bulging muscles that covered all of his enormous body frame. He must have been around 7'6" tall, and his shoulders seemed to be at least half wide as he was tall! He also had a shaved head with a number tattooed on the back of it. His number was 9. From where I was I saw only the huge back. The suit had a big gap coming from between his gigantic traps to the base of his lats. It was clearly ripped apart by the huge and striated back muscles beneath it. The sleeves of the suit were totally detached from the rest of it, exposing part of the round deltoids all covered with pulsing veins. The sleeves didn't fall to the floor just because they were holding tight around the HUGE arms which were hanging wide open as there was just no space left between the overgrown pecs and lats for them to go down. His legs really looked like two individual beings holding the upper portion of the monster. The pants looked more like a strange kind of skirt as the sew between the legs did not exist anymore, exposing the thick cables of muscle and big pulsing veins all over his enormous thighs. Even his shoes gave up the fight against the bestial body. The leather was ripped apart by the ENORMOUS and most POWERFUL looking feet I had ever seen (so far...). The fingers and part of the foot showing out of the destroyed shoe made my legs start shaking again…

The fear started taking me over and started wondering why those security guys were so monstrously huge. Instinctively I started taking some steps back with my eyes still glued to the monster on the other end of the corridor. But I stepped on something on the floor, I think it was a broom or something, which made fall over a lot of warehouse stuff making a lot of noise! I thought my heart would jump from my mouth and run away when the monster turned his HUUUGE upper body to look at me. And when he was facing me I just thought I would faint at any moment! Man, that guy was BIG!! I thought the first guy's pecs were big, but if the guy outside had a hard time holding the radio near to his head, for this one clapping hands was an impossible task! The remains of his shirt were hanging over the huge muscles. They had been ripped wide apart exposing the gigantic pecs and abs... I just have no words to describe how big and defined those bestial abs looked! I think one mount of his abs had more meet on it than I have in my bicep... and the valleys between them was deep enough for you to lose some coins inside... The monster looked at me while I tried to stand but I just kept pulling more and more noisy stuff to the floor. When I finally stood up the monster said something like "HE MUST BE THE NEWCOMER WE'RE WAITING FOR" Two things came to my mind after that: first, his voice didn't sound as deep as the roar I heard before, and second, who was he talking to? I could expect everything but the answers for both questions at once...

From another crossing corridor, past the monster who was still starring at me I heard something that made a path of ice grow along my spine... "THUMP! THUMP! THUMP!" it sounded like those things they use on construction sites to beat the columns into the floor and build the basement for a building... "THUMP! THUMP! THUMP!" It got louder and louder until the unbelievable revealed itself: the noises were from another monster's feet hitting the floor. When he appeared from behind the wall I saw the impossible: That guy was way, I mean, WAAAAYYY bigger than the one who was still staring at me, and he was the owner of the animal roar I heard before... The monstrosity in the shape of human muscles said looking deep into my eyes: "YOU COME WITH US!" I just felt the hot liquid flowing between my legs... Yes! I pissed on my pants...


The underground fight club - part II - Lost among monsters
The underground fight club - part III - When you think you`ve seen everything...

[iceman75]

Heh, very nice story, boy these guys just keep getting bigger and bigger, don't they? I wonder if he's met the biggest of all yet, or if there's actually someone even larger?

[curinga]

you aint seen nothing yet....