Big New World Chapter 28

[umlerian49]

Story withdrawn.

[dickasauras]

Another intriguing installment.

[sonic260]

(Has not read yet)
Well...there goes any hope of falling asleep...

(After Reading)
Alex becoming more agressive along with Courtney and Jennifer missing? Thing are starting to heat up! :O

[Ender]

Alex does great slapstick routines when he gets flustered and he’s really sort of cute when it happens…

As for his “little outburst” he’s been under a lot of stress since before Sammy grew Frank for Thanksgiving, and it just keeps pilling up. Like I suggested before he’s still a Aspie and when he first grew it upped his confidence and he was able to deal with it better… the last couple of growth spurts have made life more complex and it has shaken his confidence so he’s not coping as well… Aspies need a level of order, which he hasn’t had for several months… He’ll be okay when things calm down…

Well if you want the grow juice, Courtney is the guy with access… If I remember right Alex gave him the formula… If Jason was pushing to get the college to take him and Frank as a package deal he might have said too much to the wrong people. I can’t see Jason and Frank as a couple and Frank not explaining his growth spurt. And from there Jason could almost certainly link Alex, Frank and major growth spurts to Courtney. Especially if someone, that wanted the grow juice, interrogated him for several days.

If Jason has really been bagged that makes it unlikely any of Alex’s buddies is planning to peddel the grow juice. And bagging Courtney at this point is the obvious next move for an outsider. They took Jennifer because she and Courtney are never apart and, since Courtney must be nearly as big as Jason now, having her will keep Courtney in line.

I hope it is an outsider or Jason’s dad, I would really like to be wrong about my opinion of Jason from back at the beginning of the story.

Ender

[Jack of Blades]

I really feel that the best way to deal with Mr Buchanan is to remind him that the safety and security of the students of his school are the first priority. If he allows The Devil Woman onto the school to harass Alex, Alex has every right to say "Never mind about you expelling me, I could have you fired!" I HATE the way teachers and school staff treat their students as just these things instead of treating them as people. It happened to me and to many friends at school. My mother was a rimary school teacher who learnt her trade in the 60s, and the one thing that was repeated over and over was "Children are people" something the education system has since forgotten I feel...

Anyway. Enough ranting about education. GET THE NEXT CHAPTER WRITTEN FAST! I can't bear the suspense!

[JP71]

"All eyes were on the extra-jumbo muscle freak as I walked across the quad to my locker. I was wearing my too-tight-around-the-thighs, too-loose-around-the-waist sweatpants that came down just below my knees, my obscenely oversized genitals flopping around under the thin fabric for all the world to see.

My shirt was stretched almost beyond recognition, and I had to carry my backpack since I could no longer " --------------------------


Ingrained in my psyche (not to mention my "secondary psyche" further south) for all my remaining days, heh heh. Well done on another hair-raising and entertainingly compelling chapter.

[philat99]

Loved it! It's trite for me to say "the plot thickens", but nearly every chapter does that. Also, sometimes it's hard to keep in mind just how young Alex still is!!!