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Old October 23rd, 2011, 06:03 PM
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Gimm Tales: Little Miss Muffet

GRIMM TALES: little Mr. Muffet.
 
Alexander von Grimm lays in bed. He had a hard weekend, aside from the 3 little pigs, he had to go over many listings of strange veents. There is a new drug dealer in town but he cannot find out who. He also had to deal with not knowing who the mysterious substitute teacher is that he has yet to meet. Maybe he should call in sick and spy on the school.....

---on the roof---

Jadis stands on the roof. She holds a walnut up to her lips and smiles. Kissing the nut she cracks it open, revealing a large black widow crouched up inside. Her icey breath infects the spider, changing the black widow to ice blue with a black hour glass.

"go for mommy...."

The spider crawls out of the nut, down her body, and slips through a crack in the window sill to Alex's room.

---back in the room---

Alex's eyes snap open, throwing the covers off he goes to the window. His ripped swimmer's build glistening from sweat. He didnt have a nightmare, but was very toasty under the covers. He looks worried, and examines the window. He sees nothing, just a thin layer of frost on the windows. It is nearing winter, so its no wonder that the glass is frosted.

He hasnt had a nightmare or a dream in centuries. Everyday a waking nightmare with mere moments of rest. He walks away from the window, not realing the white widow moving down the glass and leaping off and onto his leg. Before he had a chance to look down he felt a sting in his leg. He doesnt even see where the spider went. His vision becomes very blurry, a fever taking over as he hits the carpeting.

He gasps for air, feeling his entire body lock up. (WHAT KIND OF POISON IS THIS?!!!) He wants to speak but his throat feels swollen shut, his body feels cold as ice, stiff as stone. He can hear his heartbeat within his head, the beating slowing down. In the last moments of consiousness it all goes black as he sees a woman's legs walk into his bedroom from the main door.
Jadis smiles, keeping her face hidden under her long black locks as she scans the room for his book. Typical as usual, he keeps his spellbook on the nightstand near the bed. If he was smart he would of found a better hididng spot. She approaches the book and grabs it. She screams in pain as electrical energy envelops her body, shooting her away from the book as it lands with a loud thud back on the table top. She gets up, staring angrily at the book, and notices Alex is gone.

She runs over to where he was on the floor, and sees no sign of an escape. How could he move if he was seconds from death? She looks around and notices the book gone. She lets out a howl of frustration as she blankets the room in permafrost and snow. She walks out of the bedroom and into the darkness of the house.

-----place...unknown----

Falling.....falling....thats all there is. Darkness all around, and the endless feeling of falling through the air. He can hear laughing, see smiles without faces, old pages from books, even paintings of fairy tales. But always...falling...what seems like hours, days, even weeks. How long as he fell? He does not know, but it feels like an endless dream. Is this hell? Limbo? He does not know.

All goes black for a while, the feeling stops as he lays there on something soft and hard at the same time. His illness gone, his falling gone. He opens his eyes, seeing grass all over and an overcast sky. He finds himself wearing pajamas with slippers like he was a patient at a mental ward. Looking around he finds overcast skies and endless miles of forests and open fields.

He turns around, seeing piles of dead corpses in the field. Then sees Billy standing behind him. What was once a muscled teenager that stood at 6'7, 250lbs of raw power began to pulse, bulge, and gain in mass. Soon becoming that hulking 700lbs beast he killed a while back. He begins to step back, if this is hell he is surely in trouble. He turns around, seeing Julia and the werebear Rob( see Grimm Tales: GOLDILOCKS AND THE THREE BEARS)coming up from a different section of the field, and from another section of the field stood the kraken Davey Johnes(grimm tales: blue beard).

"What...in the name of...the gods...?" He looked very confused.
He begins to running in the only direction not occupied by a current enemy from his past.

Julia-"So good of you to drop in Alex...." The zombie corpse Shambles after him, her body split open from her previous demise at the phallus of Rob who is also charging after Alex. He waves his hands, instead of any magic, nothing happens. He begins to panic, and begins running again.
Alex dodges left and right, the large shadows overhead from the kraken's tentacles gave away where they would fall. He continued to move through the high grass, wanting to get distance, but even with his speed he seemd no faster than a mere human. Before he gets any distance, he is pushed several yards to his left by a large bulk. He stands up, seeing he was attacked by Billy from no where.

Thomas-"Where ya going teach?" The half eaten pig man begins to shamble out of the woods. Part of his head missing and a big hole in his chest. (grimm tales: three little pigs)

Billy-"We would love to have you for dinner...."

Davey Johnes-"Come to us love, we have so much to teach you, so much we have learned..."

Alex runs into the forest, breaking off a tree branch and continues to run deep. He soon comes to a crossroads. The trees are covered n signs with arrows pointing in every direction one can think of. "Ok jackasses...which way to normal?" The signs spin around and point to his right. he continues running, weaving around trees to make it harder for the monsters to chase him. Coming to a clearing he runs into a gingerbread house.

Alex-"Oh...crap..." he doesnt even bother to catch his breath, he continues to run. He sees one woman inside with green skin and red hair, flowers sprouting from the candy walls( grimm tales: sleeping beauty). The walls begin to crack apart as two more figures emerge. First is a writhered old man( grimm tales: rumplestiltskin) and a large hulking middle man booming with heavy muscles. The man breaks the roof off, becoming 18ft tall, nearly 2,000 lbs of raw muscle. (grimm tales: snow white)

Man-"I'm still the hottest in the land you bastard!" he throws the roof at Alex, missing as it collides into the trees and crumbles like a cookie.

He continues to run through the woods, becoming very tired. He turns around, seeing they have not stopped chasing him. He did not pay attention, soon finding himself caught up in spider webs. He sturggles, but the webbing pulls him up into the air. He struggles, finding himself face to face with a giant tarantula.

He panics at first, streuggling as the spider comes closer. Then he calms down a little, recognizing the spider. "So...Anansi...what do you want you trickster?"

The spider clicks its mandibles and squints in a cheerful way. The spider draws closer. "Ohhh nothing...just hanging out. You seem to have company...."

Alex looks down seeing the zombies gathering underneath the web.
Alex begins to struggle snapping the webbing. The spider moves closer, with a look of hunger in his eyes. "Let me go trickster..."

The spider inches closer strand by strand. "Now now young alex, if you break the web the zombies will get you..."

Alex snaps some of the webbing and almost gets free. "If you insist child....." The webbing snaps, dropping alex down a dark shaft. He falls again, only floating underwater and sinking down really fast. As the last precious pockets of air escape his lungs, he is jolted awake.

He stands on a beach, dressed in his normal clothes. He looks around, wondering what the hell is going on. He holds his hand up to hide the light of the glaring sun. He sees a handsom youth standing in the water. He has long silver hair, standing about 6'2, a good 220lbs of lean raw muscle. Rippling ass cheeks tighten as he turns around, revealing a hard 8 pack, large round shoulders, thick pecs, and nice chizled legs. His face is blured out, almost like a dream state.

Alex steps forward, and seeing the water receed, becoming a tsunami behind the hot stud. The hotty holds out his hand, with a sincere face wanting help. Alex runs to him, only for the water to crash down and separate them. He is thrwashed around under the water, but still sees the tall strong stud standing under water, his hand still held out. The water gets deathly cold, the undertoe pulling them apart as alex feels everything grow crold as the grave and turn black as night.

He comes out of the water, the moon is turning to twilight. He sees Ann standing on the shoreline. he walks to her, his beautiful big bad wolf. But he stops, looking up at the sky as she points, and sees a falling star coming down to the water. He cant make out what it is, but the sudden feel of the poison comes back into him, causing him to feel sick and fall into the water again. As he falls, he falls through the sky, among many shooting stars that go out before they even find water.

All goes black and hes falling again. The feeling of endless falling. Emptyness, coldness, again with the falling. He touches a hard surface in the darkness. He stands up, wearing a blue tuxedo with his hair cut short. He looks around, standing on a stained glass floor made to look like a meadow. Before him stands an old woman dressed like a gypsy.

Alex-"I assume you have something to do with all this hallucinations?"
woman-"Come..walk with me alex...."


nxt chapter-"behind the mirror"
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Surreal! I feel like I'm watching a trailer for a new tv series! Interesting writing and very compelling!

I'll keep reading if you keep writing.....
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I see a lottttttt of Kingdom Hearts at the end there........
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yea...i played it a while back n some one told me it was a good hallucination tripp so i figured why not lol most of my dreams happen like that anyways.
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Wow. Very surreal I agree. Still good though. Keep going.
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