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Mass Effect: Alternate Ending

Hey guys, I thought I'd take a break from Xirua (( if i haven't already )) and make a mass effect 'alternate' ending. It's an ending of which Saren wins, but you experience a... different transformation, instead of becoming bones and stuff. It's more of just a quickie for you guys who want to get right to the action.

But if you want a sequel... ?

Please review. And visit my Xirua stuff!


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[COLOR=white]Commander Shepard, Ashley, and Wrex all approached the lone turian standing on the platform of the collapsing citadel tower structure.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?Well, look here, the Shepard and his sheep.? Saren commented condescendingly, turning around to face the group.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Saren was standard, in a yellow-gold uniform, however, as his body seemed quite fit, and always ready to take on action. His skin was of a obsidian shade. Commander Shepard wore black ?Onyx VII? armor and had a hardened face, tan hair buzzcut and a small goatee worn. Ashley was the simple soldier with ?Onyx I? armor set, and beautiful blonde, flowing hair, tucked behind her uniform. Wrex was the reptilian Krogan in his standard Mercenary uniform, as nothing had really changed with him.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?Let?s not chat, shall we?? Saren gave a wicked smile, and immediately pulled out a mass accelerator handgun and shot at Shepard.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Shepard quickly dodged to his right side and pulled out his own pistol, firing back at Saren with explosive rounds. Saren got hit on the chest with a shot, and yelled in pain as he got knocked off the ledge, falling to the lower ground, a garden right below. Shepard quickly ran down, and jumped off the ledge into the ?complex?. There lay Saren?s body, twitching a bit, but not dead. He got up as fast as he could, sending a shotgun blast straight towards Shepard.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?Shepard! Watch out!? Ashley cried futilely as Shepard got blasted hard, getting thrown back to the wall from the stopping power. He groaned, bleeding profusely.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Wrex scowled.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]He took out his shotgun, and aimed it right at Saren?s head. Saren quickly thought of a strategist?s plan, and sent his foot kicking to the gun, however, Wrex was too fast for him. He shot the weapon, right into Saren?s brain. Saren fell down, eyes rolling back in his head, dead.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]You could almost hear a faint mumble, ?Too quick a battle...?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Shepard lay in the corner, groaning heavily, trying to heal his wounds, while Ashley came running to Shepard to help. Wrex grinned, going right up to Saren, and shooting him full blast into the chest, overheating the shotgun.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?That takes care of that.? Wrex said, walking over to Shepard and Ashley.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?You sure he?s dead, Wrex?? Ashely asked uncomfortably.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?Yeah.? Wrex responded simply.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?Where did you shoot?? Shepard managed to ask, coughing up a bit of blood.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Wrex slowly stopped, still near Saren, and not answering Shepard.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?I asked you, where did you shoot? Answer me!? Shepard demanded.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]No response.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Wrex?s body seemed perfectly still, and his eyes seemed to focus on something. Shepard checked the direction he was looking. Just wall.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?Wrex... ?? Shepard called to Wrex nervously.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]A slow start. But Wrex leaned forward, and crashed onto the ground, eyes blank, as a huge hole in his back was shown to his vital organs. Saren was there, aiming at Wrex, with his shotgun.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?Saren! You?re still alive?! And how did I not notice the shotgun shooting?!? Shepard yelled out.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]All of a sudden, Saren seemed to have huge, red electrical currents flowing all over him. He was apparently in some kind of pain, roaring in agony. He got up, and gave a futile attempt to ?rub? the electricity off of him. It failed, without a doubt.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?What... in god...? Ashley questioned the air, staring.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]A strange sound like stretching elastic was heard. Saren gripped his head. His hands seemed to grow thicker, and with longer claws. His armor began to crack all over his body, parts easily breaking off. His leggings easily broke off, revealing larger, more muscular thighs, and an elastic loincloth covering the Turian?s crotch. The chest plating split into pieces, as the Turian?s pecs began to inflate, and his abs formed to huge sizes. He began to grow in height, as well, already reaching 7 feet 6 inches from his previous 6 feet 11 inches before. His shoulders began to increase in proportion, reaching the sizes of bowling balls. His biceps were pumping, the muscle fibers contracting and releasing their grip on the arm, expanding every time.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]But it didn?t stop.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]A colossal bulge was noticed on Saren?s loincloth, as Saren apparently grabbed at it, but failing to move it. It was easily noticed as unerect, but it was growing fast. His thighs increased to massive levels, as Saren had to spread his legs to prevent his thighs from crashing at eachother. His tight 6-pack abs were morphing more, forming into an 8-pack, hard as steel. His pecs were a whole foot out, fighting for dominance over the chest, as his shoulders were the size of watermelons. His biceps were of enormous sizes, as they were beginning to reach his head. Saren had already reached the grand height of 9 feet 11 inches.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]He continued, however, as his legs were massively proportioned, beginning to rip the undergarment more, seeing a (currently) unerect dick trying to poke through. Saren?s tight abs were transforming into an even heavier 10-pack, then 12-pack. His pecs reached out three feet, and from side to side, lengthed 8 feet in itself. His biceps and triceps were of impossibly shaped pure muscle, continually expanding, as his arms began to push out. His neck was two feet thick in perimeter, and his eyes were flaring red, shining brightly. Saren was as tall as the trees, at 11 feet 7 inches.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Finally, at long last, the undergarment ripped. At Saren?s 12 foot tall height, the dick alone was 3 feet and 2 inches long. His balls were the size of adult pumpkins, weighing over 50 pounds on it?s own. Saren was a true muscle god.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?See the power of Sovereign! See what he can do!? Saren roared, shattering the glass.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?See what I do to your love.?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?My love?? Shepard asked, as if unphased by the events.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Saren concentrated, biotic powers settling in. Ashley groaned, being thrown up into the air, held steady by biotic powers. Slowly, she was being pulled through the air to Saren. Her boots quickly broke like thin glass. Her leggings slid off with Saren?s intentions, revealing huge, muscled legs, and an extremely thin thong, but easily covering her vagina. Her ass was enormous, and Saren slapped it, realizing it to be very firm. Saren moaned a tad bit, his erection finally finishing, at a grand length of 3 feet 9 inches.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]He clenched his fist, as the chest armor shattered just like the leggings did, revealing huge breasts, in no bra, as big as canteloupes, and so firm that even though they sagged down a bit, it was amazing how they held up. Saren stuck his tongue under the thong of Ashley, and ripped it off easily, pulling back hard. Ashley looked extremely afraid, as Saren grabbed her titanic legs, and spread them. He felt her smooth body, and groping her breasts, making her feel hornier and filling with pleasure.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]In the midst of the groping, Saren grinned evilly,and quickly thrust Alyssa down on his cock, easily filling her, two feet still not fitting. Ashley screamed in ecstacy, not resisting anymore. Saren chuckled, thrusting harder and harder, and Ashley threw her head back in ecstacy, screaming in wonderful euphoria each time she got pounded, smiling widely. She seemed to have shifted moods, from the following comment.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?Shepard, I?ve found someone much better! Auhh!? She said in between moans, screams, and yells of pleasure.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Shepard couldn?t help but stare at the two, embarassed and helpless.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]The rape(?) was going on for about five minutes until Saren came. He roared with pleasure, literally spewing out gallons of cum all over Ashley, the walls, and even some on Shepard, which was flat out disgusting. Saren walked over to Shepard following the sex, and smirked at Shepard, his cock drooling cum onto Shepard.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?This is how it ends, Shepard.? Saren grinned.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]?You will die. I will continue to grow.?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]And with that, came a fatal kill of squeezing the head off of Shepard.[/COLOR]
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