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Davey's Destiny: 13-A1 My head tipped back as I gaped up at my little brother. Jesus, he was huge, and somehow not wearing a shirt made him seem even bigger. A thick neck led to impossibly wide shoulders?massive, rounded delts easily broadcasted the frightening power he held in his body. His pecs swelled outward?a shelf of muscled flesh suspended above the eight bricks of powerful abs lining his stomach. Those long, long legs were as thick as tree trunks, each head of muscle in his quads starkly defined, even under the sweatpants he wore. Davey chuckled at my stupefaction and reached out, engulfing my shoulder with his mammoth hand. ?Come on, Justin. It?s time.? I jumped under his heavy palm, but the contact surprisingly didn?t hurt. ?T-Time for what?? His grip tightened, and before I knew it he was lifting me into the air and setting me onto his shoulder. ?For you to find out my destiny.? ?Whoa!? I tried to find a grip to steady my balance, but all of his muscles were too big for my fingers to find purchase on. Then, suddenly, I realized that I didn?t need to hold on to anything?his shoulder was so wide and thick that it was like sitting on a chair. ?You?re ready to tell me? Everything?? ?Everything,? he said, clamping his hand over my thighs and striding out of the house. My eyes rounded. ?Wherever we?re going, I can walk.? He snorted. ?My legs are longer and stronger than yours. Trust me, it?s faster this way.? I tried to push off his shoulder. ?Let me down, Davey.? Davey ignored me. So I had no choice but to sit there and let him carry me wherever he wanted. A blush stained my skin as the dozens of people we passed gawked up at us, and I tried not to make eye contact, staring straight ahead of me. It was like some bizarre dream. "Hey, Justin," said a kid from my school. "Hey, Paul," I all but groaned. Eventually, we stood in front of an ice cream shop. ?Frankie?s,? I said softly, staring up at the sign. Davey shrugged his shoulders, bumping me into the air. His big hands caught me around the waist and set me onto the sidewalk. ?Let?s go in,? he said, giving my back a gentle push. Nothing he did, hurt. Maybe I wouldn?t have to have a talk with him after all? We sat on a couple of stools at the counter. Davey ordered chocolate and I asked for vanilla. ?So?? I ventured, when he didn?t say anything. ?You were going to tell me your destiny?? His mouth crooked as he made a broad, sweeping gesture with his arm. ?This is it.? I frowned, looked around. ?What?? ?Ice cream.? ?Ice cream?? He nodded. ?Ice cream.? My frown deepened. ?That?s your destiny?? He twisted around in his chair to look down at me. ?I?m going to build the biggest ice cream corporation in the world. We?re going to produce it, we?re going to market it to grocery stores, and we?re going to sell it in our own line of shops all over the world.? My face cleared and my mind reeled. ?You?re kidding me.? ?Afraid not, Justin.? I tried to say several things with no success. Forcing myself to slow down, I tried to ask my questions in order. ?The change in your personality? What does that have to do with this?? His long fingers tapped his temple. ?Corporate world?s a vicious one. Gotta have that killer instinct to get ahead.? He really planned to do this! ?Where do you plan to get the money for this, Davey?? ?I don?t have the money just yet for the machinery, so at first I?ll have to make all the ice cream by hand.? Davey lifted his arm, flexed his biceps into dizzying peaks. Men, women, and children all around us gasped. ?Good thing I have all this muscle, huh?? I just stared at him. ?Don?t you have anything else to ask, Justin? You?ve been hounding me after this secret for what feels like years.? ?Well?? I pushed my ice cream away. ?You said something about going away?? ?Oh, yeah. Eventually I?ll have to open my stores overseas. I?ll be gone for quite a while doing that, I think.? I straightened. ?All by yourself? What if you get hurt, like that coffee guy?? I closed my eyes, tried to remember the name. ?Jesse? Jesse Something.? ?Jesse Winters?? Davey rolled his eyes. ?Even if I do get into a car accident, I?m walkin? away without a scratch, I promise you.? Frowning, I rubbed at an ache in my shoulder. ?Oh, Justin, don?t worry about me hurting you anymore. It came to me in a flash how fragile the human body really is, and I?ll be better with you now.? ?Thanks,? I murmured, trying to process all of this. ?Hey,? I glanced up, ?why did you think I would hate you?? He rapped his knuckles against the countertop, putting little dents into the steel. ?This is your favorite ice cream place, right? I fully intend to destroy all the competition, so for sure you won?t be able to get your sweets here anymore.? No more Frankie?s? I couldn?t imagine it. Davey skimmed the pad of his thumb over my cheek. ?You won?t have time to miss it. Not with all the sex we?ll be having.? My body started so hard that if Davey hadn?t caught me, I would have fallen right off the stool. ?Say what?? ?We have to,? he said playfully, winking at me. ?I?ve been getting letters.? ?L-Letters?? I stammered. ?From who!? ?From our fans. It has a weird name?bro-cest or something. I told them that your little body couldn?t take my cock, but,? Davey shrugged his massive shoulders, ?they didn?t seem to care.? I took a deep breath. ?You?re just a kid.? ?Yeah, I know. Which is why I?ll be magically eighteen years old when we do fuck. Have to change to fit the fantasy. Legal reasons and all that.? ?Davey?? I ran a shaking hand through my hair. ?I?m not having sex with you.? ?You don?t really have a choice.? He cupped my chin in his powerful hand. ?Forced seduction is very hot right now.? My lips parted, his gaze dipped to my mouth, and I knew I was in trouble. But things could be worse, I supposed. He could have locked me up in a basement, he could have bound us together in some weird ancient curse, he could have made me his toy. In the grand scheme of things, ice cream didn?t seem so bad. __________________ www.rowanmcbride.com ***** "And so, may Evil beware and may Good dress warmly and eat lots of fresh vegetables." -The Tick Last edited by Rowan; April 1st, 2008 at 12:36 PM. Reason: tweaked the title to make it easier to place. |
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Ice Cream, You Scream, We All Scream For Ice Cream! BIG JOKE!! HA HA HA!!! Let it be known you certainly have a sense of humor. At first I started think that this was going to be the biggest dream sequence since who shot J.R. Ewing. Then as I read this installment I kept thinking, "What in the hell!?!" But when you referenced your character in "Warm Rush" a big smile came over me. The rest was just for giggles. You're evil! But I loved it. |
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I seem to recall a shower scene in "Dallas." xoxo Richard |
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I really liked the last two lines. It really could be worse and it makes sense that Davy as a kid would think the reason he has all his powers is so he can make ice cream. I also just wanted to sau how happy I was when you updated The Jascian Toy as well. It's my favorite. |
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Sorry Rowan...but you can't goof a goof... ...i r Iz to0 smartzies for t hat. The totally obvious "A1" gave it away. Although you maybe, repeat maybe have fooled me if Davey was going into the steak sauce business. Though I certainly wouldn't mind eating at an ice-cream joint like that. __________________ In the MGS FC's I am Psycho Mantis! "Put your controller on the floor...Put it down as flat as you can...That's good. Now I will move your controller by the power of my will alone!" |
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I Stand Corrected You're correct, Richard. I was still laughing as I was typing my last message. It was the infamous and ludicrous scene where Pamela Barnes (Victoria Principal) sees her supposedly dead husband, Bobby Ewing (Patrick Duffy), emerging from the shower saying, "Good Morning." Bobby had been "killed" exactly 31 one episodes earlier. That teaser, Rowan! |
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Hahaha, boy, did this chapter get me going. Nearly laughed myself outta my chair. Happy 4/1 to you too, Rowan. __________________ Ancient Proverb: Whatever doesn't kill you today will only make you sore the next morning. redkage |
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At first, I got all happy when I read the chapter title. Finally, after 3 months. Then, as I read it, I came to the realization... "Today is April Fool's Day"... I was fooled! Good one, Rowan... Very, very good!! Haha... You got 2 weeks left to do your taxes *cracks the whip...* You got 16 days to write the REAL chapter 13 if Davey's Destiny... Hehe... __________________ www.musclebook.org musclebook.org Forum Admin |
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That was great! Man, I wish I'd thought of doing an April Fools Day chapter. I laughed and laughed, paused for a breath, and then laughed some more. |
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*Looks through the forum to find out who last whined about Rowan adding a new chapter to Davey's Destiny following chapter 12, around the end of March, 2008... http://www.musclegrowth.org/forum/sh...6&postcount=29 *Gulp!* That was ME! *groan* *Rex quietly crawls in the corner and hides his face in shame, hoping TheMM doesn't see him out of fear of being mocked... __________________ www.musclebook.org musclebook.org Forum Admin |
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Okay, this was hilarious. |
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Tease Rowan, you're a tease but as ingenious as well. |
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It took me a while to get that this was a total joke chapter, I like how you lampooned the whole muscle story fanbase as well, I mean if you can't make fun of yourself, who can you make fun of? I will be waiting with baited breath for the real next chapter of this story. __________________ "Loved by few, hated by many, respected by ALL" The Undertaker, Deadman Inc. In the MGS FC's, I am Barf the Mawg from Spaceballs, loyal, powerful, quick witted, but I have a bit of a weight problem. http://sports.groups.yahoo.com/group/yfhmk/ Only those serious about young muscle need apply. We do accept stories, but let's keep it clean. This is the only place on the web where Ragman's "My Nephew" Stories can be found. |
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April's fool day? Oh.... I suppose that is in the USA like 28th december in Spain. Damn... i fell totally for it. At first i though it was just a dream and in the end i thought you've gotten.... too much sun in your head or something, lol. Icecream... I loved the part "our fans asked for bro-cest" hahahahahaXD The part of "controlling his strenght" is gonna be true in the real chapter? __________________ The Internet is for PORN! -Trekkie- http://chocomus.deviantart.com/ http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/user/chocomus/ |
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A high standard of imaginative writing PLUS an April Fool sting? Classic! Well done, Rowan, and happy creative work on your authentic ending. BTW worldwide domination with popcorn would do nicely for Davey - there's a neat analogy there about how the kernel grows into something altogether bigger and more desirable! |
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Thanks for having fun with me. __________________ www.rowanmcbride.com ***** "And so, may Evil beware and may Good dress warmly and eat lots of fresh vegetables." -The Tick |
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Ha-ha! Very cute trick. |
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we are not amused |
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__________________ www.rowanmcbride.com ***** "And so, may Evil beware and may Good dress warmly and eat lots of fresh vegetables." -The Tick |
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I thought it was hilarious... what does not amuse me is that we are still waiting for another chapter... Rowan, do I need to go to war again to get another chapter? |
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This again... Which one was the basement reference? |
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__________________ www.rowanmcbride.com ***** "And so, may Evil beware and may Good dress warmly and eat lots of fresh vegetables." -The Tick |
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gogr2, you are aware that the real chapter 13 has already been posted, right? |
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yes, and awaiting chapter 14 eagerly... |
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Especially since chapter 13 was the ONLY chapter Rowan posted lasted year... __________________ www.musclebook.org musclebook.org Forum Admin |
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